Question

請(qǐng)根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。
Difficulties arise in the lives of us all． What is most important is dealing with the hard times, coping with the changes, and getting through to the other side where the sun is still shining just for you．
注意：①無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；
②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限：
③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；
④詞數(shù)為120左右。

Answer 1

There is no denying that difficulties arise in the lives of us all． But what really counts is how we deal with the difficulties to succeed．
Three years ago, when I began my senior high school study, I found it extremely difficult to learn English well because there were so many new words and grammar rules to keep in mind． Hard as I might try, I still did poorly in the English exams． It was the hardest time in my life and I nearly lost heart and decided to give up when my mother found my problem． She encouraged me that it took a strong person to deal with tough times and if I chose to keep on and I would be a strong person and on the way to success． In order to prove myself, I worked even harder than ever． Gradually I began to catch up with the other students in my class． At the end of term I got the highest mark in English．
So if we want to meet the shinning sun on the other side of the difficulties, we should first take great courage to overcome them and then enjoy the joy of success．
Sample writing:
As a famous saying goes that life is not a bed of roses, we will always encounter difficulties or troubles in our daily life． But what we do in difficult situations can really make a difference．
Here is a story in my school life two years ago when I decided to take part in the 3,000-­metre race． I was confident before the race． Unfortunately, during the race，each step seemed extremely difficult for me． What’s worse, I fell on the last lap，breaking my glasses as well as my chance of winning the race． Give up or keep on? Without hesitation, I chose the latter． “Come on． You can do it!” Everyone on the sports field was cheering for me． Although I was the last one to cross the finishing line，I won the respect of my classmates and regained my confidence．
From then on, I firmly believe that if we want to meet the shinning sun on the other side of the difficulties, we should first take great courage to overcome them and then enjoy the happiness of success．

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文：題目要求根據(jù)以下提示，并結(jié)合事例，用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一篇短文。這道題目要求比較嚴(yán)格，所以在寫(xiě)作之前一定要看清題目。題目還要無(wú)須寫(xiě)標(biāo)題，不得照抄英語(yǔ)提示語(yǔ)；②除詩(shī)歌外，文體不限：③文中不得透露個(gè)人姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)；寫(xiě)作時(shí)先注意原文閱讀，了解大意，結(jié)合事例進(jìn)行寫(xiě)作，注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。寫(xiě)作時(shí)盡量使用自己不會(huì)的單詞、詞組和句型，同時(shí)也要注意使用一些高級(jí)語(yǔ)法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文屬于根據(jù)原文內(nèi)容寫(xiě)作，動(dòng)筆前，一定要認(rèn)真閱讀原文，并理解內(nèi)容。認(rèn)真看清題目要求，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫(xiě)作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類(lèi)似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。