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【題目】書面表達(dá)

請(qǐng)你為《21st Century》寫一篇報(bào)道，介紹我校為高三學(xué)生創(chuàng)立的“心靈城堡（Soul Castle）”專欄(column)，并談?wù)勛约旱母邢搿?/span>

內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：

● 開設(shè)目的：緩解壓力, 確保健康

● 專欄優(yōu)勢(shì)：專業(yè)指導(dǎo)

● 專欄內(nèi)容：建議, 心聲

● 你的感想

注意：

1. 詞數(shù)100左右

2. 開頭語已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))

3. 請(qǐng)?jiān)诖痤}卡上作答。

Our school has set up a column called “Soul Castle” for senior 3 students.

Answer 1

【答案】

Our school has set up a column called “Soul Castle” for senior 3 students. It is aimed at relieving pressure, and ensure the health of students. The column has the unique advantage that the experts in psychology can give us the expertise and guidance. It covers the thoughts and feelings of students and the professional suggestions.

From my point of view, not only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list. It also provides a platform to communicate with our teachers and parents. Moreover, we can get help and guidance from professionals to solve our mental problems. With its help, we can take the College Entrance Examination with confidence.

【解析】

試題分析：本體是一片提綱類作文，請(qǐng)你為《21st Century》寫一篇報(bào)道，介紹我校為高三學(xué)生創(chuàng)立的“心靈城堡（Soul Castle）”專欄(column)，并談?wù)勛约旱母邢�。寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)，1、措詞。在寫作時(shí)要選明確、準(zhǔn)確、生動(dòng)形象的詞，適當(dāng)?shù)厥褂贸烧Z或習(xí)語，可以避免語言的單調(diào)貧乏，使之生動(dòng)而富于內(nèi)涵。2、句子�？梢栽囉枚喾N方法來表達(dá)同一概念，不斷變化句子結(jié)構(gòu)，使語言形式豐富多彩，強(qiáng)化表現(xiàn)力。3、切題。文章內(nèi)容必須與主題保持一致，否則文章語言再好，也只能算是失敗之作。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文用了較多加分的句子和單詞，例如：ot only does our school attach importance to our study but also put our mental health at the top of the list.用了not only but also句式，再比如Moreover是一個(gè)不錯(cuò)的副詞，總體來說是一篇符合要求的作文。