Question

假如你是高一新生李華。開(kāi)學(xué)之初，你的英語(yǔ)老師Ms李希望了解每位學(xué)生的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求教學(xué)建議。請(qǐng)按以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給她寫一封信。
1.對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)；
2.自己目前的英語(yǔ)水平；
3.自己學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)存在的問(wèn)題；
4.對(duì)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)點(diǎn)的兩點(diǎn)建議。
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100 左右。
2.信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出。
Dear Ms Li,
     I am happy to have you as our English teacher.                                                             
                                                                  
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
                                                                    
Thank you!
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Ms Li,
I am very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is becoming a global village,English is getting more and more important, so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorize new words. Another question is to give us more chances to practice speaking English. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!                    Li Hua

試題分析：本題是一篇書信文體的寫作，題意和要點(diǎn)簡(jiǎn)單，考生應(yīng)不難理解寫作要求和寫作目的，考生重點(diǎn)要先仔細(xì)審題，審題主要包括以下幾個(gè)方面：（1）主體時(shí)態(tài)；（2）主體人稱；（3）內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)。尤其是對(duì)于內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)的把握要準(zhǔn)確到位。再者考生需注意盡可能使句子表達(dá)形式的多樣，盡量使用一些較復(fù)雜的句式結(jié)構(gòu)和較高級(jí)的詞匯，以提高書面表達(dá)的檔次和可讀性。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：對(duì)于應(yīng)用文寫作要簡(jiǎn)潔明了，直入主題。例文中首先就陳述自己為英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)，運(yùn)用連詞as引導(dǎo)從句，動(dòng)名詞短語(yǔ)作主語(yǔ)。文章中運(yùn)用定語(yǔ)從句，名詞性從句，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞等高級(jí)語(yǔ)法結(jié)構(gòu)。全文行文簡(jiǎn)潔流暢。