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10．目前，許多學校對學生采取封閉式管理，學生對此看法不一．請根據(jù)下表所提供的信息，用英語寫一篇100詞左右的短文，客觀地介紹討論情況，并談談你的看法．

有的同學認為	有的同學認為
學校限制我們的自由；學生和社會接觸少；學生的興趣和愛好不能得到充分的發(fā)展．…	學校是學習知識的地方：學生應該安心在學校里學習；學生缺乏自覺性，離開了老師，可能會…
你的看法：

Answer 1

分析 本文屬于陳述正反方觀點的議論文作文，主題是對學校對采取封閉式管理學生的不同觀點，題目給出了大部分要點，也要考生給出自己的觀點．文章結構清晰，先是一些同學反對的觀點，然后贊同的觀點，最后是自己的觀點，要求考生用地道的英語表達自己的觀點，要求觀點明確，駕馭語言的能力強，選擇詞匯的時候要選擇相對高級的詞匯，也要運用多種句型，讓文章更有變化．難度在于選擇合適的詞匯和句型表達文章需要的意思，可以變換使用一些容易駕馭的句子或者詞匯實現(xiàn)同樣的目的．在寫作的時候要運用合適的連接詞把要點串聯(lián)起來，使文章成為一個整體．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種句式和結構．比如不定式作真正的主語I feel it necessary to keep students at school for the focus on their study．是it作形式賓語，不定式作真正的賓語；．此外，文章還使用了大量短語get in touch with、put their heart into、lose control of等，使文章內容更具有層次感，也使語言更加連貫．
Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society．（高分句型一）
Some other think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons．（高分句型二）
But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life．（高分句型三）

解答 Nowadays a lot of schools keep their students in school all day long．Students have different opinions about it．Some of the students think they enjoy less freedom and have little chance to get in touch with society．（高分句型一）They are not able fully develop their interests and hobbies．Therefore，they have lost interest in their studies．
      Some other think school is the best place to get knowledge so they should put their heart into their lessons．（高分句型二）Some students lack the ability to control themselves．Once out of school，they may lose control of themselves and do something that will influence their studies．
      As far as I am concerned，it is necessary to keep students at school．But at the same time schools should organize various activities so that students can enjoy their school life．（高分句型三）

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．