Question

假定你是李津。作為高～新生，你升入耀華中學(xué)后已經(jīng)在這里學(xué)習(xí)和生活了近一個(gè)學(xué)期，對(duì)各個(gè)方面都有所感觸�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文給在Australia的一位筆友Tracy寫一封信，分享以下幾點(diǎn)內(nèi)容：
1.學(xué)校是當(dāng)?shù)貎?yōu)秀學(xué)校。校園美麗，學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境優(yōu)良，社團(tuán)多樣，活動(dòng)眾多；
2.同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)勤奮，互助友愛(ài)；
3．教師工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)，……（其他方面如對(duì)待學(xué)生等）；
4．目前的困難……；
5.今后一段時(shí)期的目標(biāo)和構(gòu)想。
注意：l．詞數(shù)不少于100:
2．信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總次數(shù)；
2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
Dear Tracy,
How are you recently?____________________________________________________________
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How are you getting on? Please write back as soon  as possible.
Best wishes.
Sincerely yours,
Li Jin

Answer 1

Dear Tracy,
How are you recently? I have studied in Yaohua High School, which is among the top local schools, as a freshman for more than 2 months and I cannot wait to share my feelings with you.
Our school is an ideal place to live and study in. There are beautiful pants, and nice flowers. Moreover , we have a variety of societies to choose and activities to join in.
I have friendly classmates who are hard-working and kind to each other. Our teachers, who are always ready to help us with our studies, are very professional and strict in their work.
At present, however, I am not doing well in maths. And there is still some time before I can be really independent. But I have talked it with my teacher and I will try my best to catch up with others and learn to live by myself in the future.
How are you getting on? Please write back as soon as possible.
Best wishes.                                            
Sincrerly yours,
Li Jin

解析試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。假定你是李津。作為高～新生，你升入耀華中學(xué)后已經(jīng)在這里學(xué)習(xí)和生活了近一個(gè)學(xué)期，對(duì)各個(gè)方面都有所感觸�，F(xiàn)請(qǐng)你用英文給在Australia的一位筆友Tracy寫一封信，分享以下幾點(diǎn)內(nèi)容： 1.學(xué)校是當(dāng)?shù)貎?yōu)秀學(xué)校。校園美麗，學(xué)習(xí)環(huán)境優(yōu)良，社團(tuán)多樣，活動(dòng)眾多；2.同學(xué)學(xué)習(xí)勤奮，互助友愛(ài)；3．教師工作認(rèn)真負(fù)責(zé)，……（其他方面如對(duì)待學(xué)生等）；4．目前的困難……；5.今后一段時(shí)期的目標(biāo)和構(gòu)想。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問(wèn)題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型為文章潤(rùn)色。注意要求的詞數(shù)100詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】I have studied in Yaohua High School, which is among the top local schools, as a freshman for more than 2 months and I cannot wait to share my feelings with you.這里含有一個(gè)非限制性定語(yǔ)從句；I have friendly classmates who are hard-working and kind to each other.這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句；Our teachers, who are always ready to help us with our studies, are very professional and strict in their work. 這里含有一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句。
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