Question

7．學(xué)校要開設(shè)英語選修課，現(xiàn)在學(xué)生征求意見．假如你是姚敏．你認(rèn)為英語選修課可以開設(shè)英語試聽說（English Visual-Audile-Oral）和演講與口才（Speech and Eloquence）這兩門課程．請你用英語給辦公室張老師寫一封100-120個(gè)詞的信，推薦這兩門課程，并分別說明推薦理由．
注意：信的抬頭和落款已給出（不計(jì)入詞數(shù)）．
Dear Mr．Zhang，
Knowing that our school is going to set up English elective courses，I'd like to give some suggestions． English Visual-Audie-Oral Course is a good choice．Most of us are interested in English videos and songs，which provide us vivid images and the rhyming rhythm．Thus，we can enjoy the local customs and western cultures as well as learn to sing English songs with joy and excitement．
In addition，it's necessary for us to improve our oral English．Although we are always learning English，we may not make a fluent speech or strongly debate with others like native speakers．That is why I recommend Speech and Eloquence Course．Pure pronunciation，classical expressions an d elegant gestures will be offered for us to learn and imitate．

I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation．
Yours sincerely，
Yao Min．

Answer 1

分析 本文是應(yīng)用文，根據(jù)所給提示給辦公室張老師寫一封信．推薦英語試聽說和演講與口才這兩門課程，并分別說明推薦理由．屬提綱作文．在寫作時(shí)人稱以第一人稱為主．時(shí)態(tài)以一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)為主．重要短語：set up （建立，搭建），be interested in （感興趣），would like to do （想要做某事），as well as（和，又，也），be always doing（總是做某事），make a speech （做演講），in addition to（除…之外還），provide sb with sth （給某人提供…），debate with sb （與…爭辯），recommend sth to sb （向…推薦）．

解答 Dear Mr．Zhang，
 Knowing that our school is going to set up English elective courses，I'd like to give some suggestions． English Visual-Audie-Oral Course is a good choice．Most of us are interested in English videos and songs，which provide us vivid images and the rhyming rhythm．【高分句型】Thus，we can enjoy the local customs and western cultures as well as learn to sing English songs with joy and excitement．（推薦英語試聽說課程及原因）
  In addition，it's necessary for us to improve our oral English．Although we are always learning English，we may not make a fluent speech or strongly debate with others like native speakers．That is why I recommend Speech and Eloquence Course．【高分句型】Pure pronunciation，classical expressions and elegant gestures will be offered for us to learn and imitate．（推薦演講與口才課程及原因）
 I'll be glad if you can consider my recommendation．
  Yours，
  Yao Min

點(diǎn)評 提綱作文在寫作時(shí)要注意內(nèi)容是否包含了所有要點(diǎn)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次，平時(shí)需注意積累短語和重要句型．