Question

下面短文中有10處語言錯誤。請在有錯誤的地方增加、刪除或修改某個單詞。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在該漏字符號下寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該橫線下寫上修改后的詞。
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
My father was a first - class chef．I eventually decided to give up my previously job as a salesman and train as a chef．Three years later，I became head chef in restaurant．Soon after which，I realized my career was becoming successful and I found I had to make a choice．I could neither work for a big restaurant or open one of my own．And my father became ill and I got his job. On my first day at work I was greeting by an unexpected cold reception．What made it bad was that I was having a bad cold．With my hands shook, I entered the kitchen．I hold my breath, stood up and said “You all know my Father．Whether you loved him or hated him, I don’t care about．It’s the past.  Now, Let’s get to work...”

Answer 1

【小題1】previously → previous
【小題2】加上a
【小題3】which → that
【小題4】neither → either
【小題5】And → But
【小題6】greeting → greeted
【小題7】bad → worse
【小題8】shook → shaking
【小題9】hold → held
【小題10】去掉about

解析試題分析：
【小題1】I eventually decided to give up my previously job as a salesman and train as a chef．改為previous。題意：我最后決定放棄先前的工作。previous，形容詞修飾job。
【小題2】Three years later，I became head chef in ∧ restaurant. 加上a. 題意：三年后在一家飯店成為首席廚師。restaurant在這里是泛指。
【小題3】Soon after which, 改為that。此后不久。that為指示代詞，指代“成為首席廚師”這一事實。
【小題4】I could neither work for a big restaurant or open one of my own. 改為either。題意：（因為職業(yè)上很成功）我可以到一家大飯店服務(wù)，也可以開一家自己的飯店。either … or …：要么……要么……
【小題5】And my father became ill and I got his job. 改為But.。父親的突然生病打亂了我原先的計劃，我只得接替他的工作。這是一個轉(zhuǎn)折。
【小題6】On my first day at work I was greeting by an unexpected cold reception．改為greeted。上班第一天受到冷遇。be greeted with：遭遇。
【小題7】What made it bad was that I was having a bad cold．改為worse。（不但遭到冷遇）更糟糕的是感冒了。make sth. worse：使情況更糟。
【小題8】With my hands shook, 改為shaking。hands是shake的執(zhí)行者，應(yīng)使用現(xiàn)在分詞。
【小題9】I hold my breath. 改為held。前面的entered，后面的stood都是過去時態(tài)，要求hold也用過去式。
【小題10】I don’t care about. 去掉about。care about應(yīng)后接賓語。本句中沒有賓語，about多余。
考點：短文改錯。