Question

11．假如你是李華，你的英國朋友Peter來信向你咨詢?nèi)绾尾拍軐W(xué)好中文．根據(jù)下列要點寫封回信．
1．參加中文學(xué)習(xí)班
2．看中文書刊，雜志，報紙，電視
3．學(xué)唱中文歌曲，能更好的記單詞
4．交中國朋友，幫助學(xué)習(xí)．
要求：1．回信包含所有要點，可適當(dāng)增加內(nèi)容，使行文連貫
      2．字?jǐn)?shù)100字左右，信頭已給出，不計入總字?jǐn)?shù)．
Dear Peter，

 Yours truly
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇書面表達屬于英文書信，是很常見的考查寫作能力的形式，寫作難度不大．根據(jù)提示信息要求給你的英國朋友Peter回信，告訴他如何才能學(xué)好中文．寫作時注意以下幾點：首先需要注意信件的寫作格式規(guī)范，注意抬頭和信尾的署名；其次要注意不能遺漏信件的要點．第三，寫作時根據(jù)要表達的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時兩種時態(tài)．最后，注意盡量避免使用沒有把握的單詞和句子，保持字跡工整、卷面整潔．
（高分句型一） I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．
該句使用了asking for…現(xiàn)在分詞做定語，修飾letter；
（高分句型二）it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．
該句使用了it is+形容詞 to do…做某事…；as 引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句；
連接詞使用合理，：First，Then，Besides，

解答 Dear Peter，
     （高分句型一） I'm glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to learn Chinese well．Here are a few suggestions．First，（高分句型二）it is important to take a Chinese course，as you'll be able to learn from the teacher and practice with your fellow students．Then，it also helps to watch TV and read books，newspapers and magazines in Chinese whenever possible．
     Besides，it should be a good idea to learn and sing Chinese songs，because by doing so you'll learn and remember Chinese words more easily．You can also make more Chinese friends．They will tell you a lot about China and help you learn Chinese．Try and write to me in Chinese next time．
                                                                                   Best wishes．
                                                                                  Li Hua

點評 寫作時首先審題，本題體裁為建議信，屬于常規(guī)復(fù)習(xí)內(nèi)容．選擇其中一條線路，圍繞中國傳統(tǒng)文化的主線去寫就基本能扣題，稍微需要注意題干要點之間的界限，確保要點齊全．其次要考慮高分詞語和句型的選用，從句、非謂語動詞、倒裝、強調(diào)句型等都是可考慮的高級句型；詞語和句型的選用要包含作者的感情色彩和增強表達的氣勢；再次，運用關(guān)聯(lián)詞如besides、what's  more、moreover、for one thing …for another等，使文字更加流暢．