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16．調(diào)查顯示目前我國公民人均閱讀量還不到有些國家的十分之一，"全民閱讀"也連續(xù)兩年寫入了《政府工作報告》．請以"Reading Matters"為題，寫一篇英語倡議書向English Weekly征文專欄投稿．
要點：1．造成目前現(xiàn)狀的原因：沒有閱讀習慣；過于關(guān)注物質(zhì)利益．
      2．閱讀的好處：獲取知識，開拓視野，利于思考，提高技能，豐富精神生活．
注意：1．詞數(shù) 100字左右
      2．開頭與結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
Reading Matters
Dear fellow students，
It is reported that_______________________________________________
Thanks for your listening．

Answer 1

分析 調(diào)查顯示目前我國公民年人均閱讀量還不到有些國家的十分之以，"全民閱讀"也連續(xù)兩年被寫入了《政府工作報告》．請以"Reading Matters"為題，寫一篇英語倡議書向English Weekly征文專欄投稿．要點：1．造成目前現(xiàn)狀的原因：沒有閱讀習慣；過于關(guān)注物質(zhì)利益．2．閱讀的好處：獲取知識，開拓視野；利于思考，提高技能；豐富精神生活．寫作時不要逐句翻譯，可適當增加細節(jié)以使行文連貫同時要把所提示的點寫全，語句通順，同時要注意準確運用時態(tài)、語態(tài)、上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系．根據(jù)句意適當使用并列連詞，同時也要合理運用高級詞匯和高級句子為文章增色添彩．注意：1．詞數(shù)100左右；2．開通歐與結(jié)語已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)．
【亮點說明】It is reported that the annual average reading amount of per Chinese is only about one-tenth of that some other countries in the world，which causes certain worries among us．此句運用了主語從句和非限制性定語從句；Firstly，people's lack of reading habit explains the main reason，which is the most urgent and difficult thing to change．句中使用了which引導的非限制性定語從句；it is obvious that people nowadays care more about material gains than the enrichment of the mind．主句從句和比較級完美結(jié)合；It's high time that we paid due attention to developing good reading habit as it can bring us enormous benefits．虛擬語氣的固定句式和as引導的原因狀語從句巧妙結(jié)合；reading enables us to acquire knowledge and thus broadens our horizons/reading enriches our mind and makes it possible for us to lead a meaningful and fulfilling life．動名詞/動名詞短語作主語；另外For one thing，F(xiàn)or another，What's more，等的運用為文章增色添彩．

解答 Dear fellow students，
       It is reported that the annual average reading amount of per Chinese is only about one-tenth of that some other countries in the world，which causes certain worries among us．（高分句型一）How did this come about？
       The causes consist of two aspects．Firstly，people's lack of reading habit explains the main reason，which is the most urgent and difficult thing to change．（高分句型二）Secondly，it is obvious that people nowadays care more about material gains than the enrichment of the mind．（高分句型三）
       It's high time that we paid due attention to developing good reading habit as it can bring us enormous benefits．（高分句型四）For one thing，reading enables us to acquire knowledge and thus broadens our horizons．For another，it provides enough food for thought and improves our practical skills．What's more，reading enriches our mind and makes it possible for us to lead a meaningful and fulfilling life．（高分句型五）
      Thanks for your listening!

點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題．它不僅考查學生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力．在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致，時態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓練，要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．