Question

元宵節(jié)你要帶你的美國朋友Tom去街上看活動,并給他介紹該節(jié)日的一些相關(guān)知識。你可以根據(jù)以下要點(diǎn)作介紹: 元宵節(jié)是中國的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日,每年正月十五人們都要舉辦許多活動,比如吃湯圓、賞花燈、猜燈謎、踩高蹺、舞獅子等。注意:
1. 參考詞匯： 元宵節(jié)The Lantern Festival 湯圓: sweet dumplings/ tangyuan
猜燈謎guess riddles；  踩高蹺walk on stilts； 舞獅子do lion dancing；
可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；詞數(shù):100左右。

Answer 1

  The Lantern Festival is a traditional festival in China. It falls on the fifteenth day of the first month of the Chinese lunar year.
  Whenever the festival draws near, Chinese people make some preparations and take part in all kinds of activities, like singing and dancing. As every Chinese person knows, families get together on the day of the festival and eat tangyuan. In the evening, people go out to look at the bright and colorful lanterns, which is relaxing and pleasant. In some parts of China, people take part in activities, such as guessing riddles, walking on stilts and doing lion dancing.
  On the whole, the Lantern Festival is an important festival in China, just like the Spring Festival.

試題分析：題目要求寫一篇文章，向美國朋友Tom介紹中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日--元宵節(jié)。寫作時注意用上所給參考詞匯；使用第一人稱進(jìn)行寫作；注意拼寫、標(biāo)點(diǎn)和時態(tài)的正確使用�？梢苑譃槿�部分來寫。第一部分總寫，介紹什么是元宵節(jié)；第二部分寫元宵節(jié)的慶�；顒樱坏谌�部分總結(jié)。
亮點(diǎn)說明：范文使用了較難的語法知識：時間狀語從句Whenever the festival draws near；非限制性定語從句which is relaxing and pleasant和As every Chinese person knows；定語從句和狀語從句的使用，給作文增色很多；范文使用了較多的短語：falls on, draws near, make some preparations, take part in, get together, such as等，使文章內(nèi)容充實(shí)；范文還注意使用As every Chinese person knows, In the evening, In some parts of China, On the whole等來銜接前后句和上下文。