分析 題目是要求寫一篇看圖作文,文章注意條理要清晰,邏輯順序和結(jié)構(gòu)要恰當(dāng),同時要盡量保持簡潔精干的內(nèi)容,不拖泥帶水.要注意題中所給的信息,不可偏題,也不要遺漏要點.盡量保持卷面整潔,字體美觀,注意行文的連貫性.使用一些高級句型和詞匯提升作文檔次.
【亮點說明】文章第一段第一句是一個強調(diào)句. It was March the eighth that day,Women's Day.那天是3月八日,母親節(jié).強調(diào)母親節(jié)的日期3月8日.Women's Day在句中是同位語.第二句是一個that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句,引出told的內(nèi)容.第二段倒數(shù)第二句是一個時間狀語從句.When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table,she felt very curious and happy.當(dāng)他的母親回來,看到桌子上的美味佳肴,她感到非常好奇和高興.文章中雖然沒有用很復(fù)雜的從句,但是結(jié)構(gòu)很有條理.第二段中的first、then等連詞用的非常好,體現(xiàn)了圖上的順序.文章第三段第一句,Usually副詞前置.固定搭配The best way is to 最好的方式是….范文完整體現(xiàn)了圖上內(nèi)容,是一篇還不錯的作文.
Li Hua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it.(高分句型一)
When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table,she felt very curious and happy.(高分句型二)
Usually,mothers do most of the housework at home to keep everything clean and tidy.(高分句型三)
解答 It was March the eighth that day,Women's Day.Li Hua had a good idea and told his father that he was going to do something to celebrate it.(高分句型一)He asked his father to help him.
First they decided to do some housework.Li Hua cleaned the house while his father did some washing.Then they made a good meal,cooking fish,pork and some other delicious dishes.Li Hua also laid the table and set a vase full of flowers in the middle of the table.When his mother came back and saw delicious dishes and drinks on the table,she felt very curious and happy.(高分句型二)Then the family had a pleasant festival.
Usually,mothers do most of the housework at home to keep everything clean and tidy.(高分句型三)They love their families.We should show our thanks to them.The best way is to help them with the housework.
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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