Question

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌的以下作文。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，在該詞下邊寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；  2.只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不計分。
One day, I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I ran back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then went out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worried. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.

Answer 1

【小題1】as---when
【小題2】rings---rang
【小題3】She---It
【小題4】a---the
【小題5】full前加was
【小題6】bad→ badly
【小題7】opening ---opened
【小題8】In---To
【小題9】about 去掉
【小題10】which---that

解析試題分析:一天當(dāng)作者在廚房做飯的時候，電話鈴?fù)蝗豁懥似饋�。她匆忙去接電話，原來是她的一位老朋友。她們在電話里聊了起來。忘記了關(guān)掉煤氣爐。直到聽到警報聲她才跑回廚房，發(fā)現(xiàn)做的牛肉燒焦了，而這時兩個消防員也趕到了。
【小題1】as---when考查連詞。I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings。 As 引導(dǎo)時間狀語從句表示伴隨或者強(qiáng)調(diào)動作同時發(fā)生，此處是be doing …..when句型，意思是：正在做某事這時發(fā)生了某種情況。把a(bǔ)s改為when。
【小題2】.rings---rang 考查動詞時態(tài)。I was cooking in the kitchen as the telephone rings。文章講述的是過去的事情，所以應(yīng)該用一般過去時，把rings改為rang。
【小題3】She---It考查代詞。She was my close friend。在英語中如果不知道性別，則用it代替，比如敲門時問“who is it？”，把She改為It。
【小題4】.a---the考查冠詞。When we were talking on a phone。固定短語：on the phone“通過電話”，把a(bǔ) 改為the。
【小題5】. full前加was 考查謂語動詞。The room full of smoke and the beef was bad burnt。and連接的是并列句，前面句子缺少謂語動詞，此處表示主語的狀態(tài)，所以在room后加was。
【小題6】bad→ badly 考查副詞。 The room full of smoke and the beef was bad burnt。修飾動詞應(yīng)該用副詞形式，把bad改為badly。
【小題7】.opening ---opened 考查動詞。I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows and then went out of the house.。and連接并列成分放在最后兩個詞的中間，由此判斷此處是三個連續(xù)的動作，應(yīng)該把opening改為opened。
【小題8】In---To 考查介詞。In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house。固定短語：to one’s surprise“使人吃驚的是”。
【小題9】about 去掉 考查介詞。I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke。動詞短語：tell sb sth，“告訴某人某事”，tell是及物動詞，去掉about。
【小題10】which---that 考查代詞。I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke. 由句意可知此處是強(qiáng)調(diào)句型：it was……that ，所以把which改為that。
考點：考查短文改錯