Question

第三部分寫作（共兩節(jié)，滿分30分）

第一節(jié)短文改錯（共10小題；每小題1分，滿分10分）

假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文。文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（A ),并在其下面寫出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\)劃掉。

修改：在錯的詞下畫一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。注意：1.每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn't want share things with other people. For an example, when he bought a chocolate cake,he put them in a secret place. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He said he is busy. That is,a game of tennis making him very busy. He didn't care if something he did made people angrily. For instance,on a cold night he played strong and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning. But he is difference now. He often helps Grandma with house?work. Mum with cooking and his classmates with their lessons.

Answer 1

第三部分第一節(jié)

My brother Tom was very selfish when he was a little boy. He didn't want A

to

share things with other people. For ^ example,when he bought a chocolate cake,he put them in a secret place. Then he eats it all by himself. He never helped other. He

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said he  is busy. That is，a game of tennis making him very busy. He didn't care if

was made something he did made people angrily. For instance,on a cold night he played strong

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and loudly music till 4 o'clock in the morning.  But he is difference now.  He often

loud different helps Grandma with housework, Mum with cooking and his classmates with their les?sons.