Question

8．假設你是李華，請你根據以下要點給英國筆友Tom寫信交流如何保持健康．
   要點：1．對Tom表示問候并詢問其身體狀況；
2．保持健康需要做到：作息有規(guī)律；飲食要均衡；參加體育鍛煉；保持好心情（mood）等；
3．詢問Tom保持健康的秘訣．
   注意：1.100詞左右（開頭、結尾已給出，不計入總詞數）；2．可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
3．以下諺語可選用于文中適當位置．
     An apple a day keeps the doctor away．
     Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy，wealthy and wise．
     All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．
Dear Tom，
How's everything going？I am writing to       ．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱類書信．根據題目要求可知用第一人稱展開敘述，以一般現在時態(tài)為主．內容主要包括：一點明主題；二保持健康需要做到的事情；三詢問Tom保持健康的秘訣．
高分句型：
1．As you know，having a healthy lifestyle is of great importance．句子里As 引導定語從句，表示"正如"．
正如你所知，有一個健康的生活方式是很重要的．
2．Expect to hear from you to learn something you do to keep healthy soon．句子里you do 是something的定語從句，省略了關系詞that．
期盼收到你的來信，了解你是怎樣保持健康的．

解答 第二節(jié) 書面表達（One possible version）
Dear Tom，
     How's everything going？I am writing to talk with you about something keeping fit．（點明主題）As you know，having a healthy lifestyle is of great importance．【高分句型一】The first thing to do is to live a regular life．Remember：early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy，wealthy and wise．At the same time，you should have a balanced diet．What's more，don't forget to take part in some activities．Try to do sports regularly to relax，such as walking，jogging，running or swimming．As the proverb goes，all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy．Finally，keep yourself in a good mood．Don't get annoyed by small things．（保持健康需要做到的事情）
       The above are my ways of keeping healthy．How do you like them？Expect to hear from you to learn something you do to keep healthy soon．【高分句型二】（詢問Tom保持健康的秘訣）
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
在寫作時，根據要點選詞組句，然后按照篇章結構連句成篇．在這一過程中要注意選擇恰當的表示并列、遞進、因果或轉折意義的過渡詞，把所有要點、句子連接起來，使句與句意思連貫，結構銜接，力求準確生動、條理清楚．