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2．近日教育部（the Ministry of Education）要求加強(qiáng)中小學(xué)勞動(dòng)教育，這一舉措引發(fā)了人們的熱議．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面表格中的內(nèi)容，寫一篇新聞報(bào)道．

學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)	一部分學(xué)生：勞動(dòng)教育有助于身體健康，全面發(fā)展 另一部分學(xué)生：勞動(dòng)教育占用學(xué)習(xí)時(shí)間，影響成績(jī)
你的觀點(diǎn)	…

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Recently，the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school，which arouses a heated debate．
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Answer 1

分析 本文要求寫一篇新聞報(bào)道，內(nèi)容是學(xué)生對(duì)于教育部要求中小學(xué)加強(qiáng)勞動(dòng)教育的觀點(diǎn)，寫作時(shí)注意以下幾點(diǎn)：1、涵蓋所有內(nèi)容，首先分兩方面陳述學(xué)生的觀點(diǎn)，最后闡述自己的觀點(diǎn)．2、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時(shí)態(tài)、語(yǔ)態(tài)；就本文而言應(yīng)該用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．3、注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和句式，以增加文章的亮點(diǎn)．
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】所寫內(nèi)容連貫、結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊，運(yùn)用了多樣的句式和豐富的詞匯．比如：enabling them to be well developed．現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨的狀語(yǔ)；同位語(yǔ)從句the view that this kind of education will take up their time；非限制性定語(yǔ)從句which will be spent studying otherwise；還有On the other hand 另一方面；as far as I'm concerned，就我而言等短語(yǔ)使語(yǔ)句間連接緊湊．

解答 Recently，the Ministry of Education has issued a requirement that students should be given labor education while at school，which arouses a heated debate．
     As for students，opinions are divided．Some students think that it will be of great benefit for their health，enabling them to be well developed．（高分句型）On the other hand，some students hold the view that this kind of education will take up their time，which will be spent studying otherwise．（高分句型）And it will have a negative effect on their grades．
     It's true that students are given little chance of laboring nowadays，thus lacking the sense of labor．（高分句型）So as far as I'm concerned，students definitely value more what labor brings about．（高分句型）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過(guò)程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無(wú)誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．