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17．大多數(shù)人都希望自己受人歡迎，但并非每個人都能做到．你校為此在學(xué)生中進(jìn)行了問卷．請根據(jù)以下調(diào)查結(jié)果，以How to be popular為題，寫一篇英語短文．

40%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為：	60%的學(xué)生認(rèn)為：	你的觀點(diǎn)：
1）注重外表，著重時(shí)尚；保持良好的精神狀態(tài)； 2）面帶微笑，待人和善； 3）在各類活動中，積極表現(xiàn)．	1）誠實(shí)；善解人意，關(guān)心幫助他人； 2）做個好聽眾； 3）不說別人壞話．	…

注意：1．短文須包括所有要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
       2．開頭已經(jīng)給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
       3．詞數(shù)：150左右．
How to be popular
Many people desire to be popular with others，but not everyone can achieve this goal．What is the secret to popularity？We have conducted a survey among the students recently and got the following results．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇圖表提綱類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來．動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題．本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體，故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá)．寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時(shí)也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次．特別注意在選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化．平時(shí)除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
【亮點(diǎn)說明】范文中運(yùn)用一些常見的短語in good spirits．精神狀態(tài)良好；care for關(guān)心；In this way用這種辦法；In my opinion在我看來；get along with與．．相處；speak ill of說壞話；It is also important for us to be a good listener．這個句子it 做形式主語，真正的主語是后面的不定式；In my opinion，no matter what we do，we are supposed to be ourselves 這個句子no matter what 相當(dāng)于whatever，引導(dǎo)讓步狀語從句；Only by being respectful of others can we earn their respect．這個句子運(yùn)用only+狀語+部分倒裝．

解答 How to be popular
     Many people desire to be popular with others，but not everyone can achieve this goal．What is the secret to popularity？We have conducted a survey among the students recently and got the following results．
     40% of the students surveyed believe that we should pay more attention to our appearance．（高分句型）We should make sure that we are dressed fashionably and in good spirits．In addition，if we always keep smiles on our faces and act in a friendly way towards others，people will be attracted to our good looks and impressed by our attractions．（高分句型）
     However，60% of the students think a person popular with others is always honest and considerate（高分句型）．He is always ready to care for others and help others．It is also important for us to be a good listener．In this way，people will feel comfortable enough to get along with you．Above all，we must remember not to speak ill of others at any time．
     In my opinion，no matter what we do，we are supposed to be ourselves．（高分句型）Only by being respectful of others can we earn their respect．（高分句型）Meanwhile，if we are trustworthy，I am sure popularity will come our way．

點(diǎn)評 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧