【題目】假定你是李華,曾交換去英國學(xué)習(xí),現(xiàn)已回國三個月。你想念在英國的老師Mrs. Smith,請根據(jù)以下要點給她寫一份封信:

1. 感謝他曾經(jīng)對你的幫助;

2. 介紹自己現(xiàn)在的學(xué)習(xí)情況;

3. 邀請他端午節(jié)來中國感受中國文化。

注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右;

2. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫。

Dear Mrs. Smith,

I'm writing to

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Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】Dear Mrs. Smith,

It has been three months since we parted last time. I’m writing to thank you very much for your kind help and care when I stayed in Britain. With your help, my English has improved a lot and I have learned more about your culture. Now my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.

As you know, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming. It is an important traditional festival for us Chinese. I sincerely invite you to celebrate it in China with my family. Besides, I can also show you around some places of interest. It is a good chance for you to embrace the beauty of Chinese culture.

I am looking forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

這是一篇應(yīng)用文。是按要求寫一封表達(dá)回國后的感謝并邀請對方來中國過端午的回信。

第一步:審題

體裁:應(yīng)用文

時態(tài):根據(jù)提示,時態(tài)應(yīng)為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結(jié)構(gòu):總分法

總分法指把主題句作為總說,把支持句作為分說,并以這種方式安排所寫內(nèi)容。

要求:

1. 感謝他曾經(jīng)對你的幫助;先描述離別三個月的情況,再寫感謝他曾經(jīng)給你的幫助和關(guān)照。It has been three months since we parted last time. I’m writing to thank you very much for your kind help and care when I stayed in Britain.

2. 介紹自己現(xiàn)在的學(xué)習(xí)情況;在他的幫助下,英語提高了很多,也了解到了他們的文化,現(xiàn)在老師和朋友們都很驚異我講一口流利的英語。With your help, my English has improved a lot and I have learned more about your culture. Now my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.

3. 邀請他端午節(jié)來中國感受中國文化。先介紹中國的龍舟節(jié),是中國重要的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日。邀請他和我的家人一起慶祝這個節(jié)日。還可以帶他游玩一些景點,這對于他來說是一個擁抱魅力中國的良好機(jī)會。As you know, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming. It is an important traditional festival for us Chinese. I sincerely invite you to celebrate it in China with my family. Besides, I can also show you around some places of interest. It is a good chance for you to embrace the beauty of Chinese culture.

4. 靜候回復(fù)。I am looking forward to your reply.!

第二步:列提綱(重點詞組及句型)

since we parted last time;I’m writing toWith your help;improved a lot;are surprised at;my fluent English;As you knowtraditional festival;sincerely invite youto celebrate it;show you around some places of interest;a good chance for you to; embrace the beauty of Chinese culture

第三步:連詞成句

It has been three months since we parted last time.

I’m writing to thank you very much for your kind help and care when I stayed in Britain.

With your help, my English has improved a lot and I have learned more about your culture.

Now my teachers and friends are surprised at my fluent English.

As you know, the Dragon Boat Festival is coming.

It is an important traditional festival for us Chinese.

I sincerely invite you to celebrate it in China with my family.

Besides, I can also show you around some places of interest.

It is a good chance for you to embrace the beauty of Chinese culture.

I am looking forward to your reply.

根據(jù)提示及關(guān)鍵詞(組)進(jìn)行遣詞造句,注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步:連句成篇(銜接詞)

1.表文章結(jié)構(gòu)順序:First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last

2.表并列補(bǔ)充關(guān)系:What is more, Besides, Moreover, Furthermore, In addition As well as, not only…but (also), including,

3.表轉(zhuǎn)折對比關(guān)系:However, On the contrary, but, Although + clause(從句), In spite of + n/ doing, On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that…

4.表因果關(guān)系:Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result, not because…but because…

連句成文,注意使用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞進(jìn)行句子之間的銜接與過渡,書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰,

第五步:潤色修改

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