Question

4．假若你是李華，你的英國筆友Jack正在學(xué)漢語，他發(fā)來Email向你請教漢語成語"吃一塹，長一智"（ A fall into the pit，a gain in your wit．）的意思．請你用英語寫封回信，為他解釋此成語的意思，并舉一生活或?qū)W習(xí)中的具體事例來闡述你對該成語的體會(huì)，助其加深理解，鼓勵(lì)他學(xué)好漢語．
要求：1、詞數(shù)不少于120；
2、除了該成語外，信中不可出現(xiàn)其它漢語；
3、郵件的開頭、結(jié)尾已給出，但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
Dear Jack，
I'm very glad to receive your email and very delighted to know you're learning Chinese．
      ．
Yours sincerely
LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
It can also means A man must become wise at his own experience．
這也意味著一個(gè)人必須根據(jù)自己的經(jīng)驗(yàn)變得明智．
高分句型二：
Second，I bought a MP3 on the internet last week，but to my surprise，the MP3 was just a toy when I saw the real thing，then I am very sad and I do not want to buy it at the same store the next time．
其次，我上周買了一個(gè)MP3在互聯(lián)網(wǎng)上，但讓我吃驚的是，當(dāng)我看到真正的MP3只是一個(gè)玩具，然后我很傷心，我下次買它不想在同一家商店．

解答 Dear Jack：
     How are you？I heard that you want to know the meaning of A fall into a pit，a gain in your wit．It can also means A man must become wise at his own experience（高分句型一）．Can you understand me？Here are some examples．
     First，I asked my classmate where is the post office，and I was cheated by him．So the next time，I will not believe him at all．Second，I bought a MP3 on the internet last week，but to my surprise，the MP3 was just a toy when I saw the real thing，then I am very sad and I do not want to buy it at the same store the next time（高分句型二）．If you have such experiences，then you can say the saying：A fall into a pit，a gain in your wit．Or A man must become wise at his own experience．
     Can you understand it now？if not，write to me and I will give you more ideas．
     Best wishes!
                                                                                                               Yours sincerely
                                                                                                                 Li Hua

點(diǎn)評 本書面表達(dá)為議論文，議論文是對某現(xiàn)象或觀點(diǎn)進(jìn)行點(diǎn)評．寫作時(shí)，應(yīng)注意按提出、分析、解決問題的邏輯順序來安排文章結(jié)構(gòu)，使用足夠的論據(jù)來分層次論證自己的觀點(diǎn)．