Question

16．假定你是李華，最近，你校正在舉辦以"和諧校園"為主題的英語文化節(jié)．為此，你們班將組織一次主題文化會(huì)，那么我們?cè)撊绾巫瞿兀空?qǐng)你用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿，談?wù)勀銓?duì)創(chuàng)建和諧校園的一些想法，內(nèi)容包括"與人相處"和"校園環(huán)境"兩個(gè)方面，每個(gè)方面至少應(yīng)提出2條建議．
注意：1．詞數(shù)不少于120詞，開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．
2．短文內(nèi)容需適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，使行文連貫．
3．參考詞匯：和諧 harmony； 和諧的harmonious
Dear fellow students，
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 Thank you．

Answer 1

分析 寫好這類作文要注意幾個(gè)步驟：1． 認(rèn)真審題，找準(zhǔn)提示語中的關(guān)鍵詞或句，確定中心思想．2． 依據(jù)關(guān)鍵句，草擬提綱，梳理文章的脈絡(luò)3． 準(zhǔn)確定位人稱、時(shí)態(tài)．注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和高級(jí)句型使文章顯得更有檔次．4．最后還要認(rèn)真查驗(yàn)是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯(cuò)誤及標(biāo)點(diǎn)誤用等
高分句型一：
Our school is aiming at building a harmonious school．I think it is everyone's duty to work hard to achieve this goal．
我們學(xué)校的目標(biāo)是建設(shè)和諧學(xué)校．我認(rèn)為努力實(shí)現(xiàn)這一目標(biāo)是每個(gè)人的職責(zé)．
高分句型二：
At the same time，we should communicate with our parents regularly so that they can know what is happening in our school and what is in our mind．
同時(shí)，我們應(yīng)該經(jīng)常與父母溝通，這樣他們就可以知道我們學(xué)校發(fā)生了什么，我們心里想的是什么．

解答 Dear fellow students，
Our school is aiming at building a harmonious school．I think it is everyone's duty to work hard to achieve this goal（高分句型一）．What should we do now？
First of all，we should be friendly to our classmates and try our best to help each other．Secondly，we should respect and trust our teachers and develop a pleasant relationship with them．At the same time，we should communicate with our parents regularly so that they can know what is happening in our school and what is in our mind（高分句型二）．Thirdly，I think，we should protect our environment and keep our school yard clean．We should take care of the equipment in the classroom and the plants in the school yard．Don't spit and throw rubbish everywhere．
Let's take action from now on．Let's work together to live in harmony．
Thank you．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 開放性作文給出一定的寫作主題，并此為基礎(chǔ)進(jìn)行思維和聯(lián)想，自由發(fā)揮．不僅考查學(xué)生在內(nèi)容、結(jié)構(gòu)安排、語言運(yùn)用和組織方面的能力，而且對(duì)學(xué)生的想像力、發(fā)散思維、歸納判斷能力也有很高的要求．