Question

4．用英語寫一篇不少于120詞的短文，介紹你所喜愛的一位老師．短文要包括以下要點：
1．老師的姓名、年齡、精神面貌；
2．老師對我們的教育和影響；
3．我們對老師的評價．
                           

Answer 1

分析 本文是提綱類作文，根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時．文章分為三部分：一 老師的基本情況；二 老師對我們的教育和影響；三 對老師的評價．
高分句型：
1．Compared with other teachers（方式狀語，Compare和主語Mrs．Amon 之間是主動關(guān)系），Mrs．Amon pays more attention to her way of teaching．
與其他的老師相比，Amon老師更多的關(guān)注她的教學方法．
So，instead of giving us answers immediately，she encourages us to think by ourselves whenever （引導讓步狀語從句，表示"凡是…的時候"）she puts forward questions．instead of 表示"不是"，put forward 表示"提出"．
當她提出問題的時候，不是立刻給我們答案，她鼓勵我們自己思考答案．

解答 My Teacher Mrs．Amon
Of all my teachers，Mrs．Amon is the one who impresses me most．Though she is 44，she looks very young for her age．And she's one of the most popular teachers in our school．（老師的基本情況）
Compared with other teachers，Mrs．Amon pays more attention to her way of teaching．（高分句型一）She tries various ways to make her classes lively and interesting．In her opinion，we should not only know"what"，but also understand"why"．So，instead of giving us answers immediately，she encourages us to think by ourselves whenever she puts forward questions（高分句型二）．With her help，we've learned how to analyze and settle problems．What a wonderful world of"why"she leads us to!（老師對我們的教育和影響）
She is such a learned person that we all admire her very much．We are very lucky to meet such a good teacher，and we will remember her forever．（對老師的評價）

點評 本文屬于人物類短文寫作，屬于提綱類的作文，對考生的要求較高．要求考生組織好要點，在進行串聯(lián)寫作．寫作時要使用合適的連接詞連接起全文，同時注意組織全文的要點順序，使文章更有條理．