分析 本篇書面表達(dá)屬于提綱類作文,根據(jù)提示信息你上周剛剛參加了你校舉辦的第五屆英語演講比賽,并從四十名選手中脫穎而出,獲得"一等獎".在準(zhǔn)備參賽期間,你的外教Mr.Smith對你提供了很多指導(dǎo)和幫助.現(xiàn)請你用英語給他寫一封感謝信.寫作時注意以下幾點:1、仔細(xì)閱讀有關(guān)提示,弄清試題提供的所有信息,明確幾個要點:獲獎情況及感受;回顧準(zhǔn)備過程;感謝他的幫助,邀他來家做客. 2、提綱是文章的總體框架,要在提綱的范圍內(nèi)進行分析、構(gòu)思和想象.要依據(jù)提示情景或詞語,按照一定邏輯關(guān)系來寫.本文寫作時可以按照要點所給的順序?qū)懀?、根據(jù)要表達(dá)的內(nèi)容確定句子的時態(tài)、語態(tài).4.注意使用高級詞匯和句式,以增加文章的亮點.
【亮點說明】本文結(jié)構(gòu)緊湊,層次分明,而且使用了多種表達(dá):beyond one's imagination 超乎想象;make rapid progress 取得快速進步;achieve a good result 取得一個好成績;benefit from…從…中受益;all in all 總而言之;have a good time 玩得開心;take part in參加;make progress進步;all in all總而言之
I got First Prize out of 40 competitors,which was totally beyond my imagination.(高分句型一)
It's because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(高分句型二)
Without your help,I wouldn't have achieved such a good result.(高分句型三)
解答 Dear Mr.Smith,
I'm very excited to tell you something about the fifth English Speaking Contest I took part in last week in our school.
I got First Prize out of 40 competitors,which was totally beyond my imagination.(高分句型一)When I heard the final result,I couldn't believe my ears and jumped with joy.
It's because of your efforts that I have made such rapid progress in my spoken English.(高分句型二)Before the contest,whenever you had free time,you would help me practice my spoken English.Besides,you communicated with me as much as possible,and corrected my pronunciation and intonation.What's more,you taught me some helpful speaking skills and made me full of confidence.Without your help,I wouldn't have achieved such a good result.(高分句型三)Also,I have benefited a lot from this competition.All in all,I really appreciate your help.
Thank you again for your advice and kind help.I sincerely invite you to my home for dinner and have a good time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
點評 英語寫作是一項主觀性較強的測試題.它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運用語言的能力.在撰寫時要注意主謂語一致,時態(tài)呼應(yīng),用詞貼切等.要提高英語寫作水平,需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練:一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練,要有扎實的造句、翻譯等基本功,即用詞法、句法等知識造出正確無誤的句子;二是寫作知識和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧.
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