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3．Big or small，rejection affects us all．Harry Potter was rejected．So was The Twilight Saga．If authors J．K．Rowling and Stephenie Meyer hadn't kept trying with publisher after publisher，we'd all have missed out on some great adventures．
Rejection doesn't have to be about the big thing like not getting into your top college，not making the team，or not getting asked to the prom （舞會(huì)）．Everyday situations can lead to the feeling of rejection，too，like if your joke doesn't get a laugh，if no one remembers to save you a seat at the lunch table，or if the person you really like talks to everyone but you．
Feeling rejected is the opposite of feeling accepted．But being rejected （and we will all be at times） doesn't mean someone isn't liked，valued，or important．It just means that one time，in one situation，with one person，things didn't work out．
Rejection hurts．But it's impossible to avoid it altogether．In fact，you don't want to-people who become too afraid of rejection might hold back from going after something they want．Sure，they avoid rejection，but they're also 100% guaranteed to miss out on what they want but won't try for．
【寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容】
1．以約30個(gè)詞概括上文的主要內(nèi)容．
2．以約120個(gè)詞就"How to deal with rejection"這一話(huà)題發(fā)表你的看法，內(nèi)容包括：
（1）講述一次你被拒絕的經(jīng)歷； （2）你當(dāng)時(shí)的感受； （3）你認(rèn)為應(yīng)該如何正確面對(duì)拒絕．
【寫(xiě)作要求】
作文中可以使用親身經(jīng)歷或虛構(gòu)的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內(nèi)容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子．
【評(píng)分標(biāo)準(zhǔn)】
概括準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言規(guī)范，內(nèi)容合適，語(yǔ)篇連貫．
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Answer 1

分析 本文是讀寫(xiě)任務(wù)型寫(xiě)作，這類(lèi)作文可按照三段式模板寫(xiě)：第一段：概況所給短文要點(diǎn)．第二段：過(guò)渡詞引出主題句---闡述理由．第三段：個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)．特別要注意第一段的概括．用自己的語(yǔ)言概括，不能照搬照抄原文． 時(shí)態(tài)用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)．人稱(chēng)用第一和第三人稱(chēng)． 重要短語(yǔ)：miss out （遺漏，錯(cuò)過(guò)），compete with（與…競(jìng)爭(zhēng)），be eager to（渴望），participate in（參加），in one's spare time（在空閑時(shí)間），turn down（拒絕），deal with（處理），have an effect on（對(duì)…有影響），acknowledge sth（認(rèn)可某事），release emotions（釋放情緒），consider…as…（認(rèn)為…為…），try one's best to do（努力做某事）．
【高分句型一】
1．Although rejection makes us feel hurt，we can never avoid it，or we'll certainly miss out on things we want．
此處是由連詞"although"引導(dǎo)的讓步狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為"we can never avoid it，or we'll certainly miss out on things we want"．
【高分句型二】
2．Personally，if we can deal with rejection well，it will have a minimal effect on us．
此處是由連詞"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句，主句為"it will have a minimal effect on us"．
【高分句型三】
3．Second，we can tell our family or friends①what happened and how we feel about it or even cry②if we want to-it's a natural way to release our emotions．
①此處是由連詞代詞和連接副詞"what"和"how"引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句，主句為"we can tell our family or friends"．
②此處是由連詞"if"引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句．

解答 Everyone has experiences of being rejected．Although rejection makes us feel hurt，we can never avoid it，or we'll certainly miss out on things we want．【高分句型一】（概括）
    Three years ago，I competed with my classmates for an important role in an English show to be held in my school．I was so eager to participate in it that I practiced hard in my spare time．However，I was turned down in the last round．（經(jīng)歷）I felt really disappointed and deeply hurt because my friends made it but I failed．（感受）
    Personally，if we can deal with rejection well，it will have a minimal effect on us．【高分句型二】First，we should have a positive attitude toward rejection； that is to say，we ought to acknowledge it and keep reminding ourselves that rejection is always a possibility．Second，we can tell our family or friends what happened and how we feel about it or even cry if we want to-it's a natural way to release our emotions．【高分句型三】Last but not l east，we should consider rejection as an opportunity for self-improvement and try our best to get accepted next time．（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)）

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