Question

13．假定英語(yǔ)課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文．文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯(cuò)誤僅涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
    增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏詞符號(hào)（∧），并在此符號(hào)下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分．
In recent years，the volunteering spirit has spread between the Chinese people，especially youngsters．Actually，an increased number of people become volunte ers every year in China．
Volunteering actions are of great beneficial to both those in need and the society．What is known to all，volunteers played an active role in National Youth Games in Fujian．Without them，it will be a tough task to hold this grand National Youth Games．Therefore，we can say that it was those volunteers who ensure the success of these games．
As high school student，we should get active involved in volunteering activities．Only by participating we learn how to work well in a team，how to improve our social skills．Undoubtedly，all of these are important for our growth．So，we should take an action to learn and to grow．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要介紹志愿精神對(duì)于我們自己和社會(huì)都是有巨大好處的，在活動(dòng)中，我們會(huì)知道怎樣團(tuán)結(jié)，怎樣提高自身能力和組織能力．

解答 In recent years，the volunteering spirit has spread between the Chinese people，especially∧youngsters．Actually，an increased number of people become volunte ers every year in China．
Volunteering actions are of great beneficial to both those in need and the society．What is known to all，volunteers played an active role in National Youth Games in Fujian．Without them，it will be a tough task to hold this grand National Youth Games．Therefore，we can say that it was those volunteers who ensure the success of these games．
As high school student，we should get active involved in volunteering activities．Only by participating we learn how to work well in a team，how to improve our social skills．Undoubtedly，all of these are important for our growth．So，we should take an action to learn and to grow．
詳解：
1．between改為among 考查介詞．between意為"在（兩物或兩地區(qū)）之間"，among意為"在…之中"，此處應(yīng)是"在…之中"．
2．加among 考查介詞．根據(jù)句意：特別是在年輕人中間．用介詞among．
3．increased改為increasing 考查現(xiàn)在分詞．increasing意為"越來(lái)越多的"，increased意為"增加的，增強(qiáng)的"，此處應(yīng)是"越來(lái)越多的"．
4．beneficial改為benefits 考查名詞．"of+抽象名詞"構(gòu)成的短語(yǔ)相當(dāng)于該抽象名詞的同根形容詞，即介詞of后要接名詞．
5．What改為As 考查定語(yǔ)從句．分析句子結(jié)構(gòu)可知這是一個(gè)定語(yǔ)從句，先行詞是后面的整個(gè)句子volunteers played an active role in National Youth Games in Fujian，要用關(guān)系代詞as，what不引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句．
6．will改為would 考查虛擬語(yǔ)氣．根據(jù)句意：沒(méi)有他們，舉行這個(gè)宏大的全國(guó)青年運(yùn)動(dòng)會(huì)將會(huì)是一個(gè)艱巨的任務(wù)．用would．
7．ensure改為ensured 考查強(qiáng)調(diào)句．英語(yǔ)強(qiáng)調(diào)句型：It is/was+被強(qiáng)調(diào)部分（通常是主語(yǔ)、賓語(yǔ)或狀語(yǔ)）+that/who（當(dāng)強(qiáng)調(diào)主語(yǔ)且主語(yǔ)指人）+其他部分．如果前面用it was，則后面的謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞用一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)．
8．student改為students 考查名詞復(fù)數(shù)．根據(jù)句中主語(yǔ)we，student要用復(fù)數(shù)形式．
9．a(chǎn)ctive改為actively 考查副詞．get是動(dòng)詞，要用副詞修飾．
10．去掉an 考查固定搭配．take action意為"采取行動(dòng)，行動(dòng)起來(lái)"，是固定搭配．

點(diǎn)評(píng) 高考短文改錯(cuò)題的形式有說(shuō)明文，短文故事，書(shū)信等，具有很強(qiáng)的實(shí)用性．短文的內(nèi)容和語(yǔ)言都符合高中學(xué)生的實(shí)際，從表面上看類(lèi)似一篇學(xué)生習(xí)作．首先，通讀全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的時(shí)態(tài)、人稱(chēng)及行文邏輯，在通讀全文時(shí)把一些容易的錯(cuò)誤先改好，再進(jìn)行逐句改錯(cuò)．其次，要進(jìn)行逐個(gè)句子的改錯(cuò)．這是要對(duì)文中的詞法、句法和語(yǔ)篇著重分析和特別注意．最后把改好的短文再閱讀一遍，檢查答案是否正確，感覺(jué)是否還有不妥之處，最終形成定稿．