Question

3．請根據如圖寫一篇120-150個詞的短文．你的短文應包括下列要點：
1．簡要描寫圖畫內容；
2．說明圖畫含義；
3．表達你的觀點．

Answer 1

分析 考查看圖作文寫作．本文的主題是Too Much Care Spoils a Child；過多給孩子的寵愛會毀掉孩子的未來，講述的是現在社會上存在的過度溺愛孩子的現象，導致孩子們不懂關愛，不懂如何與人交往．我們應該讓孩子自己做自己能夠做的事情，開心的成長．要求考生有很強的審題能力，能根據圖表在腦海里勾勒出故事發(fā)生的始末，考生的思維量是非常大的．然后根據圖表內容組織要點，要注意要點的完整性，不能有遺漏．要求考生在保證內容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力．
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，層次分明，而且使用了多種表達：As is shown in the picture above，the blooming plant is being destroyed by overwatering．句中使用了as引導的非限制性定語從句；They are doing all these without knowing that they are actually spoiling us．句中 that為賓語從句；Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities．句中使用了倒裝句

解答 Too Much Care Spoils a Child
      As is shown in the picture above，the blooming plant is being destroyed by overwatering．（高分句型） Often people do things with good intentions，but the result may be quite different．Such can also be the case with us while we grow up．
      To spare us the kind of hardships they had in their childhood，our parents tend to offer us too much care，for example，making beds，washing clothes and even carrying school bags for us．（高分句型）They are doing all these without knowing that they are actually spoiling us．As children，what we really need is to experience difficulties and take challenges so that we can learn from our own mistakes and grow to be independent．（高分句型） Only in this way can we become stronger to shoulder our due responsibilities．（高分句型）

點評 看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉換成英語語言文字，再根據這些要點謀篇布局．要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達出來，除了能表達清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據詞數要求，適當拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調．如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、過程、結果這六個要素；如果是說明文或議論文，考生則首先要對圖畫的內容進行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進行說明或議論．此時考生一定要注意把握圖畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內容．