Question

【題目】假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下短文。短文中共有10處錯誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯誤涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改。
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在此符號下面寫出該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫出修改后的詞。
注意：1).每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2).只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分。
Dear Barbara,
How are you? Today I've got a wonderful news to tell you. I have admitted to Berkely school in California. More than 3,000 students took exams for it, but only a few was chosen and I was one of them. Therefore, my parents are not happy about it. They are strong against me going there.They say it is too far away that they will not see me for a whole year and they are afraid that we will feel homesick.They can't imagine so young a girl like me live alone.They advise me to choose a university near my home instead.Then I would be able to continue living with them.How can I persuade them to accept the fact what I have grown up?
Yours Faithfully,
Jane Blair

Answer 1

【答案】①去掉wonderful前的a ；②have后加been； ③was改為were ； ④Therefore改為However ； ⑤strong改為strongly； ⑥too改為so； ⑦we改為I； ⑧l(xiāng)ive改為living； ⑨would改為will； ⑩what改為that。

【解析】本文是一封書信， 是 Jane Blair請求Barbara說服Jane Blair的父母而寫的一封求助信。
①考查冠詞。由于news是不可數(shù)名詞，所以前面不能用冠詞a修飾，故把a去掉。

②考查現(xiàn)在完成時被動式。由于I和admit之間是被動關(guān)系，所以此處應(yīng)該用被動語態(tài)，故在have后面加上been。

③考查主謂一致。主語I后面應(yīng)該用謂語動詞were，故把was改成were。
④考查副詞。根據(jù)上下文可知此處表示“轉(zhuǎn)折”，所以應(yīng)該用However，故把Therefore改成However。

⑤考查副詞。此處副詞strongly用來修飾謂語動詞are against，故把strong改成strongly。

⑥考查連詞。so…that…固定搭配，表示“如此……以至于”，故把too改成so。

⑦考查代詞。句意：他們害怕我會想家。故將改為I。

⑧考查動名詞。imagine doing sth.固定搭配。所以imagine后面應(yīng)該接動詞ing形式，故把live改成living。

⑨考查情態(tài)動詞。由于此處表達的是一般將來時的含義，所以應(yīng)該用情態(tài)動詞will，故把would改成will。

⑩考查關(guān)系代詞。此處the fact后面接的從句是定語從句，用來修飾the fact，所以應(yīng)該用關(guān)系代詞that修飾，故把what改成that。