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12．最近一段時(shí)間，共享單車在城市的大街小巷隨處可見，它給人們帶來(lái)便利的同時(shí)，各種問(wèn)題及不文明現(xiàn)象也隨之而來(lái)．請(qǐng)你根據(jù)所見所聞，說(shuō)說(shuō)自己的看法并提出建議，以"Bike Sharing"為題寫一篇英語(yǔ)短文．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫．
Nowadays bike sharing is increasingly popular in some cities as it provides an effective solution to the"last mile"problem to schools or to workplaces．It is not only a greener method of transportation but also provides a user-friendly experience．However，the new form has also led to problems such as arbitrary parking，deliberate destruction and theft．
I think the bike-sharing service companies have faced a challenge to improve the offline business management to meet the demand of the users．More importantly，every user has responsibility to obey the rules to make the bike-sharing develop in a more standard way．All in all，I hope the new win-win trend could have a bright future．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是關(guān)于共享單車問(wèn)題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一共享單車的現(xiàn)狀已經(jīng)帶來(lái)的便利和各種問(wèn)題；二自己的看法和建議．
高分句型：
1．Nowadays bike sharing is increasingly popular in some cities as it provides an effective solution to the"last mile"problem to schools or to workplaces．句子里bike sharing 是主語(yǔ)；as引導(dǎo)原因狀語(yǔ)從句；an effective solution 表示"一個(gè)有效的解決方法"．
最近，共享單車在一些城市逐漸受到歡迎，因?yàn)樗�能有效的解決到達(dá)學(xué)校和單位最后一英里的問(wèn)題．
2．More importantly，every user has responsibility to obey the rules to make the bike-sharing develop in a more standard way．句子里has responsibility to 表示"有責(zé)任做某事"；to make the bike-sharing develop 是目的狀語(yǔ)，表示"為了共享單車的發(fā)展"； in a more standard way是方式狀語(yǔ)，表示"以一種更標(biāo)準(zhǔn)的方式"．

解答 Bike Sharing
Nowadays bike sharing is increasingly popular in some cities as it provides an effective solution to the"last mile"problem to schools or to workplaces．【高分句型一】It is not only a greener method of transportation but also provides a user-friendly experience．However，the new form has also led to problems such as arbitrary parking，deliberate destruction and theft．（共享單車的現(xiàn)狀已經(jīng)帶來(lái)的便利和各種問(wèn)題）
I think the bike-sharing service companies have faced a challenge to improve the offline business management to meet the demand of the users．More importantly，every user has responsibility to obey the rules to make the bike-sharing develop in a more standard way．【高分句型二】All in all，I hope the new win-win trend could have a bright future．（自己的看法和建議）

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