Question

20．書面表達(dá)假如你叫李華，你的朋友Jenny來信向你詢問如何保持健康．請(qǐng)你給他發(fā)一封e-mail提些建議．內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：
1．注意合理飲食，多吃水果蔬菜；
2．保證充足睡眠，至少8小時(shí)；
3．堅(jiān)持鍛煉身體，多參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng)．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)100左右；
2．可適當(dāng)增添細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
Dear Jenny，
                                 
Yours LiHua．

Answer 1

分析 【亮點(diǎn)說明】How nice to hear from you!感嘆句位于句子開頭；In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy．疑問詞加動(dòng)詞不定式運(yùn)用巧妙；Since we grow very fast，we are in  need of nutritious food，such as fresh vegetables，fruits，fish，meat and so on．Since引導(dǎo)原因狀語從句，在此表示一種客觀事實(shí)；I think you'd better not eat food with much sugar and fat．賓語從句出現(xiàn)在句中；And you should get plenty of sleep，which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day．非限制性定語從句和動(dòng)詞不定式完美結(jié)合；Only in this way can you keep fit．部分倒裝把文章推向了高潮；另外，However，In addition，的點(diǎn)綴，為文章增色添彩．

解答 Dear Jenny，
     How nice to hear from you!In your letter you asked me how to keep healthy．I would like to give you some advice．
     As we know，food is of great important to us teenagers．Since we grow very fast，we are in  need of nutritious food，such as fresh vegetables，fruits，fish，meat and so on．（高分句型一） However，I think you'd better not eat food with much sugar and fat．And you should get plenty of sleep，which is necessary for you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day．（高分句型二） In addition，you should take physical exercise regularly．It will be beneficial to your health．Only in this way can you keep fit．（高分句型三）
      Best wishes!
                                                                                                                                                      Yours，
                                                                                                                                                       Li Hua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí)的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．