Question

最近你參加了學(xué)校組織的一次農(nóng)村社會(huì)實(shí)踐活動(dòng)，發(fā)現(xiàn)了一些問題，請(qǐng)據(jù)此給China Daily寫一份稿件。要點(diǎn)如下：
1．存在問題
※廢棄物隨處丟棄；
※文化娛樂活動(dòng)貧乏；
※外出務(wù)工者的子女缺乏關(guān)愛。
2．你的建議
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注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；2．可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；3．短文的開頭語已為你寫好(不計(jì)入總詞數(shù))。
Now, people’s life in rural areas is becoming better and better. However,              
                                                                             
                                                                             

Answer 1

Now, people’s life in rural areas is becoming better and better. However, there are some problems worth our concern.
Very often we come across rubbish thrown here and there. No dustbins, no cleaners. Additionally, few amusements are available. Worse still , some children, especially those whose parents work outside, have formed bad habits due to lack of care.
So effective measures must be taken to solve those problems. First, it is necessary for the government to develop a cleaning system to beautify the rural areas, where more dustbins and cleaners are needed. Another is to organize more activities to make people’s life colorful. Last but not least, some organizations should be set up to help look after the children.
I’m fully convinced that only by doing small things with universal love, we’ll make our country more beautiful and harmonious.

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