Question

【題目】書面表達

假設你是Abby，是學校英文報社“知心學長”欄目主編。一位叫Sophia的學妹來信反映自己有“拖延”的壞習慣。即使她有很多如做作業(yè)、彈琴等重要的事要做，也總是不由自主地把時間花在看電視、玩手機等瑣事上，為此她非常苦惱。請用英文給她回信，提一些建議。

內(nèi)容包括：1．拖延的本質(zhì)；2．改正的建議。

注意：1.詞數(shù)100左右；

2．可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫；

3．文章的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計人總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：procrastination n．拖延，耽擱

Dear Sophia，

I am glad to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________

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In a word, don't spoil yourself. Although you have a long way to go, the first step is very essential. Good luck!

Yours,

Abby

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Sophia，

I am glad to hear from you. To be honest, I have the same experience as you. But you have to know that procrastination is the thief of time. The following advice may help you overcome it soon.

The most effective means to solve this problem is that you can make a “to do” list. For example, you can write “Finish home work before Saturday night” on your plan. If you manage to finish it, you can reward yourself. Otherwise, punish yourself. What’s more, you can find a person to remind you to finish your work efficiently from time to time. Different people have different efficient times. But it doesn’t matter what time it is. Just don’t waste time, following the schedule strictly. Last but not the least, do it now, just from now.

In a word, don't spoil yourself. Although you have a long way to go, the first step is very essential. Good luck!

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一篇關于“克服拖延癥建議”活動的應用文。在寫作時要注意根據(jù)題干已給出的兩個方面要點著手，分成兩段分別講述。因為提示信息較少，所以要充分發(fā)揮想象，增加適當?shù)募毠?jié)以使行文連貫，充實內(nèi)容。在寫作時盡量使用恰當?shù)倪B接詞，插入語以使文章層次分明，使用多種句式結(jié)構(gòu)和高級詞匯亮點來提高文章的檔次，如定語從句，賓語從句和狀語從句等。文章的最后一段用來總結(jié)書信內(nèi)容。