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【題目】假如你是李華，當(dāng)今網(wǎng)絡(luò)已經(jīng)把世界變成了真正的“全球村”，作為一名中學(xué)生，請你給某報社寫一封信，就網(wǎng)絡(luò)對教育的影響談?wù)勀愕目捶ā?/span>

要點(diǎn)：1.網(wǎng)絡(luò)對教育影響的利弊各一條及你的理由；

2.你的建議一條；

注意：1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 信的開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3. 可以適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir/Madam,

The Internet has transformed the world into a global village, altering all aspects of our life, especially education. Here, I am writing to share my thoughts on its positive effect as well as negative one.

The most obvious advantage lies in the wide choice of courses. Learners can have access to the courses tailored for personal needs, regardless of time and space. As a result, learning occurs in such an efficient way that gaining knowledge is easiest than ever.

The downside is just as noticeable. Along with individualized courses, the Internet presents half-truths that puzzle the young minds where self-control and judging power are still forming.

Therefore, I strongly suggest that the use of the Internet should be under supervision of adults. （或者：parents and teachers should provide guidance to ensure it best serves the mental and physical growth of the teens）.

Yours faithfully,

Li Hua

【解析】試題分析：本文是一封書信，你作為一名中學(xué)生給某報社寫一封信，就網(wǎng)絡(luò)對教育的影響談?wù)勀愕目捶�。寫好此文，需注意三點(diǎn)：一是寫信格式要準(zhǔn)確。二是要詳略得當(dāng)，本文應(yīng)重點(diǎn)寫的是網(wǎng)絡(luò)對教育影響的利弊各一條及你的理由。三要注意適當(dāng)?shù)卦黾蛹?xì)節(jié)，恰當(dāng)?shù)厥褂眠B接過渡詞，以使行文連貫。另外，在寫作時要注意時態(tài)、語態(tài)的合理運(yùn)用。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】

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