Question

讀寫任務（共1小題，滿分25分）
閱讀下面的短文，然后按照要求寫一篇150詞左右的英語短文。
It was a winter morning, just a couple of weeks before Christmas 2005. Trevor, my husband, parked his bike outside the back door as he usually does. After putting in 10 hours of labor, he returned to find his bike gone.
The bike, a black Kona 18 speed, was our only transport. Trevor used it to get to work, putting in 60-hour weeks to support his young family.
I was so sad that someone would steal our bike that I wrote to the newspaper and told them our story. Shortly after that, several people in our area offered to help. One wonderful stranger even bought a bike, then called my husband to pick it up. Once again my husband had a way to get to and from his job. It really is an honor that a complete stranger would go out of their way for someone they have never met before.
People say that a smile can be passed from one person to another, but acts of kindness from strangers are even more so. This experience has had a spreading effect in our lives because it strengthened our faith in humanity（人性）as a whole. No matter how big or how small, an act of kindness shows that someone cares. And the results can be everlasting.
[寫作內容]
1．以30字概括短文的內容。
2．以約定120個詞表達你對“助人為樂”的看法，包括下面內容：
（1）敘述你或你的朋友幫助人或得到別人幫助的經(jīng)歷
（2） 你對現(xiàn)代社會是否需要“助人為樂 ”的精神的看法及理由
[寫作要求]
作文中可使用自己的親身經(jīng)歷或虛構的故事，也可以參照閱讀材料的內容但不得直接引用原文中的句子

Answer 1

The author describes her experience of losing her bike but afterwards getting help from many people. The author thinks highly of the acts of kindness and believes it will influence many other people.
This reminds me of my experience when I was eight years old. I was left alone at home, doing my homework when an old man knocked at my door and begged for food. He was in rags and tired, obviously coming from a long distance. I hesitated at that moment because my family was not well off. But when I saw his worried look, I filled his bowl with rice. He was very thankful to me and said that I would be rewarded for my kind heart. Many years have passed, I still well remember that I have ever given a hand to an old man who was in need.
Nowadays, some people claim to have been cheated out of money when they try to offer help to others. However, I still insist that the acts of kindness should be encouraged. If everyone is willing to hold out their hands to those in trouble, there will be fewer problems in this world.

試題分析：本文首先描述了丟了自行車后來得到了很多人的幫助，作者認為這樣的善意的行為對其他人有很好的影響。你對“助人為樂”的看法，可以敘述一次你得到別人幫助的具體的經(jīng)歷來說明助人為樂的社會價值。你認為這個社會應該需要助人為樂的精神，因為助人為樂能夠讓我們的社會更和諧更美好。要求考生在保證內容要點全部概括的基礎上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進而用自己的語言來表達某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達能力
點評：開放性作文只給出了一個話題，給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地很大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點的能力。在完成開放性作文時，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內，選擇句式時要賦予變化，因為這樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個要點組織成一個完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個人觀點的時候，可以使用諺語來提升整個文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。