Question

今年雙十一，天貓商城總銷售額達350億，這相當于王府井百貨所有門店一年的總銷售額。請你圍繞此現象，從以下三個方面，用英語寫一篇短文。
1. 此現象說明的問題
產生此現象的原因（至少兩點）
3. 你對此現象的看法
注意：1. 詞數120左右；
2. 可適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
參考詞匯：天貓商城 Tmall               銷售額sales            十億 billion
This year, on 11 November, __________________________________________________________
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Answer 1

This year, on 11 November, the sales of Tmall reached 35 billion yuan, which equals the total sales of all the Wangfujing Department stores for a whole year. It shows that the way people buy and sell things is changing and online shopping is becoming increasingly popular.
The reason why people are crazy shopping online are as follows. For one thing, people can buy whatever they want at a much lower price online and all this can be done by just click on the mouse. For another, it has become a trend for people to buy things on this special day, so you may find yourself out of date if you don’t do the same.
In my opinion, while online shopping offers us a lower price and a wider variety, we should always buy things we really want and avoid wasting money.

解析試題分析：考查提綱式作文：圍繞雙十一的現象，從三個方面，用英語寫一篇短文，考生首先要認真閱讀前面的提示，認清寫作要求和提綱之間的關系，這篇文章的提綱很詳細，根據所給提綱，以此為基礎充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當。語言力求準確、簡潔。根據情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標點誤用等
【亮點說明】This year, on 11 November, the sales of Tmall reached 35 billion yuan, which equals the total sales of all the Wangfujing Department stores for a whole year.這句話用了定語從句， It shows that the way people buy and sell things is changing and online shopping is becoming increasingly popular.這句話用了賓語從句,      The reason why people are crazy shopping online are as follows.這句話用了定語從句， people can buy whatever they want at a much lower price online and all this can be done by just click on the mouse.這句話用了whatever引導的賓語從句， it has become a trend for people to buy things on this special day, so you may find yourself out of date if you don’t do the same. 這句話用了it做形式主語， while online shopping offers us a lower price and a wider variety, we should always buy things we really want and avoid wasting money. 這句話用了讓步狀語從句，還有文章還使用了For one thing, For another, In my opinion,這樣的關聯詞使文章更加連貫。
考點：考查提綱類短文