Question

假設你是李華，你所在的班級最近舉辦了一次主題為“Learn to Be Thankful(學會感恩)”的演講比賽。請用英語寫一篇短文介紹這次活動，內(nèi)容包含如下要點：
1.班主任發(fā)表主題演講，號召同學們學會感恩；
2.同學們以自身的經(jīng)歷為例，表達對父母的愛和感謝；
3.你自己的感受……
注意：1.詞數(shù)120左右；
2.可以增加適當情節(jié)以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

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Recently a speech contest was held in my class under the theme of “Learn to Be Thankful”.Our head teacher made a speech at first and called on all the students to learn to be thankful.Then some students told us their stories between them and their parents.Some were so touching that many of us were moved to tears.At last we students all expressed our love and thanks to our parents.
I learned a lot from the activity.We get love from others,so we should also give our love back to people around us,including our parents,our teachers,and our friends.Maybe we can only do some small things for them.If everyone dedicates a little love to others,the world will become more wonderful.

試題分析：本題是一篇給材料作文，材料是考生熟悉的東西，考生不難理解寫作的目的和要求。考生重點應認真審題，審題包括幾個方面:1.文章的時態(tài)2.內(nèi)容要點。尤其內(nèi)容要點的把握準確到位。你所在的班級最近舉辦了一次主題為“Learn to Be Thankful(學會感恩)”的演講比賽，這句話其實也是一個要點，有的考生把它給漏掉了。3.考生要盡可能的使用較復雜的句子結構，盡量使用高級詞匯以便得到較高的分數(shù)
點評：寫英語作文，當然基本功很重要，好的英語作文中肯定必不可少的得有長句和復合句，這只能靠考生平時的練習。但是，有時候即使句子寫得很好，但分數(shù)還是不夠高。其實，說到底，是因為考生的英語作文中缺少閃光點，句子寫得很好，但是嚼之無味，很難把作文分數(shù)提上去。