Question

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），在其下面寫上該加的詞。
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉。
修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞。
注意:  1. 每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
2. 只允許修改10處，多者（從11處起）不記分。
My neighbor Li Hai is going to graduate college soon and he hasn’t found the job yet. He was once advising to learn computer skills, so he thought it was difficult. When he saw others learning English, he shook his head, says it was too hard to remember new words. He enjoyed watching TV, playing cards, smoke and so on. He felt it was hard for him to give away all these habits. Not long ago, he went to look for a job. When he knew talents were great needed, he sighed and regretted the time that what he had wasted. He told me how he wished he has worked hard in college and asked me not to copy his example.

Answer 1

【小題1】graduate 后面加from
【小題2】the改成 a
【小題3】advising改成 advised
【小題4】so 改成but
【小題5】says 改成saying
【小題6】smoke改成smoking
【小題7】away改成up
【小題8】great 改成greatly
【小題9】去掉what
【小題10】has改成 had

解析試題分析：我的鄰居李海要大學(xué)畢業(yè)了，但是還沒有找到一個(gè)工作。因?yàn)樗�有很多壞�?xí)慣，也不肯學(xué)習(xí)技術(shù)，當(dāng)他因?yàn)闆]有才能找不到工作的時(shí)候，才后悔。
【小題1】我的鄰居李海要大學(xué)畢業(yè)了，graduate from “從…中畢業(yè)”
【小題2】但是還沒有找到一個(gè)工作。泛指“一份工作”，the改成 a
【小題3】他被建議學(xué)習(xí)電腦科技。使用被動(dòng)語態(tài)：advising改成 advised
【小題4】他被建議學(xué)習(xí)電腦科技，但是他覺得很難。so 改成but
【小題5】他搖搖頭，說記單詞太難了。says 改成saying，是做伴隨狀語
【小題6】和watching TV, playing cards并列用動(dòng)名詞, smoke改成smoking
【小題7】他覺得很難戒掉所有的壞習(xí)慣。Give away贈(zèng)送，泄漏，改成give up放棄，戒掉
【小題8】當(dāng)他知道才能很重要的時(shí)候。用副詞greatly修飾needed。
【小題9】他后悔浪費(fèi)掉的時(shí)間。這是定語從句，用that引導(dǎo)就可以
【小題10】他告訴我他多么希望在大學(xué)的時(shí)候努力學(xué)習(xí)啊。Wish后面的從句用虛擬語氣，用相應(yīng)的過去時(shí)表示虛擬，因?yàn)槭钦f的上大學(xué)的事情，用過去完成時(shí)：has改成 had
考點(diǎn)：考查短文改錯(cuò)