Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你的加拿大朋友David給你發(fā)來(lái)email,希望你給他簡(jiǎn)要介紹中國(guó)過(guò)春節(jié)的一些文化習(xí)俗。
內(nèi)容包括：貼春聯(lián),包餃子,看春晚,拜年,放鞭炮,走親訪友等.
注意：1. 詞數(shù)100詞左右；
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié),以使行文連貫;
3.開頭已寫好,不計(jì)入總數(shù). 生詞: 春聯(lián)----Spring Festival couplets
Dear David,
I’m glad to receive your email.____________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear David,
I’m very glad to receive your email. I’m willing to tell you about how we Chinese celebrate the Spring Festival. The day just before the lunar New Year, every family will paste the Spring Festival couplets on the door and make preparations for making dumplings. On New Year’s Eve, family members sit together, enjoying the delicious dumplings as well as appreciating the Spring Festival gala. When the New Year bell rings, all the people will cheer and firecrakers are set off. With the New Year’s Day coming, people will dress up and go out to visit friends and relatives to pay New Year's call each other. Everywhere is filled with joy.  
Could you please drop me a line talking about how westerners celebrate the New Year?
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

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【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文涵蓋了所有的要點(diǎn)，語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)潔，但是不乏好的詞組和句式：make preparations for 準(zhǔn)備，set off 燃放，be filled with充滿， drop me a line給某人寫信，On New Year’s Eve, family members sit together, enjoying the delicious dumplings as well as appreciating the Spring Festival gala. 這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做伴隨狀語(yǔ)， With the New Year’s Day coming, people will dress up and go out to visit friends and relatives to pay New Year's call each other. 這句話用了with復(fù)合結(jié)構(gòu)。