Question

假設(shè)你是高一新生李華。月考之后，你的英語(yǔ)老師Ms Shen 希望了解每位同學(xué)的英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)情況，并征求教學(xué)建議。請(qǐng)按以下要點(diǎn)用英語(yǔ)給她寫(xiě)一封信。
1. 對(duì)英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)的認(rèn)識(shí)；
2. 自己目前的英語(yǔ)水平；
3.自己英語(yǔ)學(xué)習(xí)存在的主要問(wèn)題；
4.對(duì)英語(yǔ)教學(xué)的兩點(diǎn)建議。
注意：
1.詞數(shù)100左右；
2.信的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出。
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Dear Ms Shen,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
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Thank you!
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Ms Shen,
I’m very happy to have you as our English teacher.
As the world is become a global village,English is getting more and more important,so mastering English means we can see the world through a new window.
My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart,and that I often feel nervous when speaking English.I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memorise new words.Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking.I believe we can make much progress in English with your help.
Thank you!
Li Hua

試題分析：本文屬于半開(kāi)放性作文，是老師征求學(xué)生對(duì)自己教學(xué)的意見(jiàn)。只是大概給出三個(gè)方面，具體的要點(diǎn)要由學(xué)生自己來(lái)添加，在第一部分中要充分表示出對(duì)英語(yǔ)重要性的認(rèn)識(shí)，把英語(yǔ)作文一門(mén)非常重要的學(xué)科來(lái)學(xué)習(xí)。第二部分可以具體闡述自己的學(xué)習(xí)問(wèn)題，如閱讀能力不強(qiáng)，寫(xiě)作不熟練，詞匯有較大問(wèn)題；對(duì)老師教學(xué)的建議可以從多給學(xué)生練習(xí)的方面著手。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開(kāi)放性作文對(duì)考生的要求較高，要求考生自己篩選要點(diǎn)，合理組織要點(diǎn)和謀篇布局。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)注意使用合適的連接詞和高級(jí)的詞匯句型，提高文章的層次和檔次。