Question

如今，網(wǎng)絡(luò)已經(jīng)成為日常生活中必不可少的工具，它給我們帶來了很大的便利，但也有很多不利。下面請你就網(wǎng)絡(luò)的弊端談一下自己的看法。內(nèi)容必須包含以下要點(diǎn)：
1.電腦不能代替教師上課；
2.不在網(wǎng)上學(xué)習(xí)可以增強(qiáng)合作學(xué)習(xí)的能力；
3.長時(shí)間看電腦的危害。
注意：1.詞數(shù)：120--150
2.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

Answer 1

Nowadays the Internet has become part of our daily life. Some students even think that computers can give us lessons instead of teachers .I don't agree with this opinion. In my opinion, we can't have lessons without teachers because teachers can help us whenever we meet with difficulties or questions. What's more, it's very important to work together as a class.
There are some other disadvantages besides these.Firstly, it will be harmful to our eyes if we look at a computer for a long time. Secondly, it takes us so much time , money and energy. If we spent too long time playing computer games and got addicted to it , it would be very difficult to get out of it. What's worse, we may have access to the scenes of violence and sex

試題解析：
作文主要寫電腦的利和弊，從這兩方面進(jìn)行闡述，認(rèn)真審題，知道要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容，把要點(diǎn)加以整理，用適當(dāng)?shù)木湫瓦M(jìn)行概括；概括時(shí)可以主要用簡單句，也可以適當(dāng)用復(fù)雜句，但要確保復(fù)雜句使用正確；切記要點(diǎn)要全，不要遺漏；注意語法正確，單詞拼寫正確，字體干凈。
點(diǎn)評：要認(rèn)真審題，用正確的語言表示。切記要點(diǎn)要全，不要遺漏；注意語法正確，單詞拼寫正確，字體干凈。