Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你收到在美國(guó)的姑母的一封電子郵件，說(shuō)你剛上大學(xué)的表哥染上了抽煙的習(xí)慣。你姑母很擔(dān)心他的健康，請(qǐng)你給你的表哥寫(xiě)一封電子郵件，勸他戒煙。
寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容
1、吸煙既浪費(fèi)錢(qián)又致病，甚至能引起致命性疾�。�
2、吸煙對(duì)周?chē)�的人也有害，�?huì)影響同學(xué)、朋友間的關(guān)系；
3、在宿舍（dormitory）吸煙如不注意會(huì)引起火災(zāi)；
4、為了自己和他人，盡早戒煙。
寫(xiě)作要求
1、必須用5個(gè)句子表達(dá)全部?jī)?nèi)容；
2、電子郵件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。
Dear Wang Lin,
Congratulations on you entering the university. How are you getting on?  ______________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Wang Lin,
Congratulations on your entering the university. How are you getting on? I was shocked to hear that you got into the habit of smoking. As we know, smoking not only wastes a lot of money, but also result in many diseases, even deadly ones. Since smoking does harms to you yourself and others around you, it may have a bad effect on the relationship betwee you and them. Besides, if you don’t smoke in the dormitory with care, it may cause a fire. For the sake of yourself and others, you should quit smoking as soon as you can.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua

解析試題分析：考查提綱類作文，本文是要向表哥介紹吸煙的危害，給出大部分的要點(diǎn)。本文的難點(diǎn)在于選擇合適的詞匯把文字提示的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)，同時(shí)要注意選擇合適的連接詞把各要點(diǎn)連接起來(lái)。也要使用多變的句式讓文章充滿變化，不要過(guò)于死板。
考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文
點(diǎn)評(píng)：本文是要向表哥介紹吸煙的危害。對(duì)考生的謀篇布局的能力要求較高，要合理的分布各個(gè)要點(diǎn)，用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞來(lái)連接成流暢的短文。在選擇詞匯時(shí)要注意選擇一些相對(duì)高級(jí)的詞匯讓文章的層次更高。