Question

假設(shè)你是李華，你收到在美國的姑母的一封電子郵件，說你剛上大學(xué)的表哥染上了抽煙的習(xí)慣。你姑母很擔(dān)心他的健康，請你給你的表哥寫一封電子郵件，勸他戒煙。

寫作內(nèi)容

1、吸煙既浪費(fèi)錢又致病，甚至能引起致命性疾��；

2、吸煙對周圍的人也有害，會影響同學(xué)、朋友間的關(guān)系；

3、在宿舍（dormitory）吸煙如不注意會引起火災(zāi)；

4、為了自己和他人，盡早戒煙。

寫作要求

1、必須用5個句子表達(dá)全部內(nèi)容；

2、電子郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總句數(shù)。

Dear Wang Lin,

Congratulations on you entering the university. How are you getting on?  ______________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Wang Lin,

Congratulations on your entering the university. How are you getting on? I was shocked to hear that you got into the habit of smoking. As we know, smoking not only wastes a lot of money, but also result in many diseases, even deadly ones. Since smoking does harms to you yourself and others around you, it may have a bad effect on the relationship betwee you and them. Besides, if you don’t smoke in the dormitory with care, it may cause a fire. For the sake of yourself and others, you should quit smoking as soon as you can.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

試題分析：考查提綱類作文，本文是要向表哥介紹吸煙的危害，給出大部分的要點(diǎn)。本文的難點(diǎn)在于選擇合適的詞匯把文字提示的內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來，同時要注意選擇合適的連接詞把各要點(diǎn)連接起來。也要使用多變的句式讓文章充滿變化，不要過于死板。

考點(diǎn)：考查提綱類作文

點(diǎn)評：本文是要向表哥介紹吸煙的危害。對考生的謀篇布局的能力要求較高，要合理的分布各個要點(diǎn)，用適當(dāng)?shù)倪B接詞來連接成流暢的短文。在選擇詞匯時要注意選擇一些相對高級的詞匯讓文章的層次更高。