Question

根據(jù)以下提示。請(qǐng)給中國(guó)日?qǐng)?bào)寫一篇英文簡(jiǎn)訊。要點(diǎn)如下：
1、王剛，男，37歲，教授�，F(xiàn)在清華大學(xué)工作。
2、1983年畢業(yè)于湖南大學(xué)，畢業(yè)后執(zhí)教留校。
3、他刻苦鉆研，科研成果顯著。1988年去日本一所大學(xué)深造，獲得物理學(xué)博士學(xué)位。
4、很多國(guó)家的大公司以高薪聘請(qǐng)他，他拒絕了。
5、他于1994年毅然回國(guó)報(bào)效祖國(guó)。目前已為祖國(guó)作出了很大貢獻(xiàn)。
　　　注意：字?jǐn)?shù)100左右。

Answer 1

Wang gang – a young Scientist
Dr. wang gang , aged 37 , is now working as a professor in Qinghua University , Beijing. Since he graduated from Hunan University in 1983, he got rich scientific fruit. Later in 1988, he was sent to a university in Japan to go on with his studies. Through hard work, he got excellent results and received a doctor’s degree for physics.
Soon after he became famous, many big companies from different countries tried to invite him to work there and promised to give him high pay . But Dr Wang didn’t accept the invitation , for he made up his mind to work for his own country .
Therefore, he returned to China in 1994. Now he has made great contributions to his motherland.

本文是一篇給材料作文，寫一篇英文簡(jiǎn)訊介紹王剛教授的事跡，要點(diǎn)都已經(jīng)給出了，可以根據(jù)要點(diǎn)翻譯，在行文中，我們可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫。范文中就使用了合理的連詞和較高級(jí)的語法結(jié)構(gòu)，使文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，增色不少。
【寫作亮點(diǎn)】：Dr. wang gang , aged 37 , is now working as a professor in Qinghua University , Beijing. 和Through hard work, he got excellent results and received a doctor’s degree for physics.這兩句，使用了過去分詞做定語，和一些短語，不僅嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)谋磉_(dá)完整意思，又使文章渾然一體。同時(shí)文章中使用了適當(dāng)?shù)倪B詞，比如：Later ，Therefore,等，使用文章結(jié)構(gòu)嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)，渾然一體。