Question

【題目】假定英語(yǔ)課上英語(yǔ)老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請(qǐng)你修改你同桌寫(xiě)的以下作文。文中共有10處語(yǔ)言錯(cuò)誤，每句中最多有兩處。錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改。

增加：在缺詞處加一個(gè)漏字符號(hào)（∧），并在其下面寫(xiě)出該加的詞。

刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（＼）劃掉。

修改：在錯(cuò)的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫(xiě)出修改后的詞。

注意：1.每處錯(cuò)誤及其修改均限一詞。

2.只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計(jì)分。

It is a joke of the fire alarm. When Sophie was cleaning the blackboard after his class ended last night, the fire alarm went off. The alarm was sounded like the busy signal on the phone, but 1,000 times loud. Instead of leave the building, she walked about to see that the problem was. The school seemed to be empty. Then she walked by one room, but saw about seven students inside. She told everyone to leave immediate, and after almost five minutes, both of them left the building. Then a school police office arrived the school and walked around the area. He said it was a false alarm and used his key to turn down the alarm.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】his---her

【2】去掉was

【3】loud改為louder

【4】leave改為leaving

【5】that改為what

【6】but改為and

【7】immediate改為immediately

【8】both改為all

【9】arrived后加at

【10】down改為off

【解析】

試題分析：本文是一個(gè)關(guān)于火警的笑話。

【1】his---her根據(jù)Sophie可知是女性，故把his---her。

【2】去掉was sound聽(tīng)起來(lái)，是不及物動(dòng)詞，故去掉was。

【3】loud改為louder 句意：大1000倍，用比較級(jí)，故把loud改為louder。

【4】leave改為leavingInstead of后跟名詞或動(dòng)名詞，故把leave改為leaving。

【5】that改為what see后面是一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，賓語(yǔ)從句缺少引導(dǎo)詞，缺少表語(yǔ)，故把that改為what。

【6】but改為and 句意：他步行經(jīng)過(guò)一個(gè)房間，看見(jiàn)七個(gè)學(xué)生在里面。此處是遞進(jìn)關(guān)系，而不是轉(zhuǎn)折關(guān)系，故把but改為and。

【7】immediate改為immediately 副詞修飾動(dòng)詞，故把immediate改為immediately。

【8】both改為all 因?yàn)榍懊嫣岬绞瞧邆�(gè)學(xué)生，故把both改為all。

【9】arrived后加at arrive at+小地點(diǎn)；arrive in+大地點(diǎn)，“到達(dá)學(xué)�！�，故在arrived后加at。

【10】down改為off 固定詞組：turn off關(guān)掉；turn down拒絕�！瓣P(guān)掉警報(bào)器”，故把down改為off。

【知識(shí)歸納】

1.以e結(jié)尾的形容詞變成副詞時(shí)，有的直接加ly ;有的把e去掉再加ly.possible---possibly； simple---simply; gentle---gently; terrible---terribly; true---truly; flexible---flexibly；immediate--- immediately; brave---bravely; wise---wisely；active---actively

2. turn短語(yǔ)

in turn 輪流，依次；turn off 關(guān)掉，關(guān)閉；拐彎，使轉(zhuǎn)變方向；turn into v. 變成；進(jìn)入；turn on 打開(kāi)，發(fā)動(dòng)；turn out 生產(chǎn)；結(jié)果是；關(guān)掉；出動(dòng)；驅(qū)逐；turn over 移交給；翻閱；把…翻過(guò)來(lái)；發(fā)動(dòng)；營(yíng)業(yè)額達(dá)到；反復(fù)考慮； turn in 交上；歸還；拐入；告發(fā)；[口]上床睡覺(jué) ；turn up 出現(xiàn)；發(fā)生；開(kāi)大；發(fā)現(xiàn)；卷起；使仰臥；turn out to be 結(jié)果是；原來(lái)是；turn down 拒絕；向下轉(zhuǎn)折 ；turn away 避開(kāi)；解雇；不準(zhǔn)…入內(nèi)；走開(kāi)；轉(zhuǎn)過(guò)臉 ；turn round 轉(zhuǎn)身，轉(zhuǎn)向；歸航；回車(chē)道；轉(zhuǎn)變。