Question

【題目】假定你是李華，你校學生會正招募選手代表學校參加”英語辯論賽”(English Debate Competition)，你想申請參加�，F(xiàn)請你向學生會主席寫一封申請信，內容包括:

1. 表達你的愿望；2. 描述你的特長；3. 希望得到批準。

注意:1. 詞數(shù)100左右；

2. 可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Chairman,

The Students’ Union is recruiting some students to participate in English Debate Competition on behalf of our school. I’m extremely eager to be one of the team members.

I have shown my great English talent since I was seven years old. So far, I have had effective communication and oral expression skills in English. I’ve also been good at thinking logically and persuading others to believe my points of view. Besides, I’ve taken part in several Chinese Debate Competitions before, which I think can show my competence in debating with others.

I hope that I’ll have the honor to represent our school in the competition. I will appreciate it if you can approve of my application as soon as possible. Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇書面表達屬于應用文，要求考生寫一封郵件，申請參加英語辯論賽。

第一步：審題

體裁：應用文

時態(tài)：根據(jù)提示，時態(tài)應為一般現(xiàn)在時和一般將來時。

結構：三段式結構。第一段表達寫信目的；第二段描述個人特長；第三段描述希望獲準

要求：1. 表達你的愿望；（be eager to be one of the team members）

2. 描述你的特長；

1）英語流利（effective communication and oral expression skills）

2）邏輯思維能力和說服力較強（be good at thinking logically and persuading others）

3）經(jīng)驗豐富（have taken part in; before）

3. 希望得到批準。（approve of my application）

第二步:列提綱 （重點詞組）

participate in; on behalf of; be eager to; be good at; persuade sb. to do; take part in; have the honor to do; as soon as possible; look forward to

第三步：連詞成句

1. The Students’ Union is recruiting some students to participate in English Debate Competition on behalf of our school.

2. I’m extremely eager to be one of the team members.

3. I’ve also been good at thinking logically and persuading others to believe my points of view.

4. Besides, I’ve taken part in several Chinese Debate Competitions before, which I think can show my competence in debating with others.

5. I hope that I’ll have the honor to represent our school in the competition.

6. I will appreciate it if you can approve of my application as soon as possible.

7. Looking forward to your early reply.

根據(jù)提示及關鍵詞（組）進行遣詞造句，注意主謂一致和時態(tài)問題。

第四步：連句成篇（銜接詞）

1.表并列補充關系：what is more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; as well as; not only…but (also); including,

連句成文，注意使用恰當?shù)倪B詞進行句子之間的銜接與過渡，書寫一定要規(guī)范清晰，

第五步：潤色修改