Question

10．假如你是高三學生李華，你的好朋友Nancy在你校的友好學校美國圣西諾高中讀十二年級．你們�；ネㄠ]件，最近你們剛談論過"中國夢"這個話題．畢業(yè)在即，她來信問你的夢想，請給她寫封回信．主要內(nèi)容包括：
（1）對夢想的理解　　  （2）你的人生夢想　　3．如何實現(xiàn)你的夢想
要求：1．詞數(shù)100字左右  2．信的開頭和結尾已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)
Dear Nancy，
I'm glad to hear from you．Now I am writing to share you my dream．（點明寫信的目的）
Our homeland dreams to restore the former glory，which inspires me to recall my dream-to become a doctor，saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers．【高分句型一】（自己的人生夢想）
Being a motivation and goal，dreams make us determined，diligent and devoted as well as making life more meaningful．However，it is quite plain that obstacles cast a fierce eye on me alongside．Therefore，giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam is my first challenge I am to face consciously．【高分句型二】Also，I am fully convinced that sparing no efforts to offer toil and sweat firmly and consistently will contributes a lot．（如何實現(xiàn)自己的夢想）
I am in curiosity about yours and reply to me soon，please．（希望知道對方的夢想）
Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇關于夢想話題的作文．根據(jù)題目要求可知用第一人稱和一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)．內(nèi)容包括：一點明寫信的目的；二自己的人生夢想；三如何實現(xiàn)自己的夢想；四希望知道對方的夢想．
高分句型：
1．Our homeland dreams to restore the former glory，which inspires me to recall my dream-to become a doctor，saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers．
句子里which引導非限制性定語從句，代指主句這件事；saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers．是非謂語動詞做伴隨狀語．
我們的祖國夢想是重現(xiàn)強國夢，這激勵著我實現(xiàn)我的夢想，我夢想成為一個醫(yī)生，挽救生命，降低邊遠地區(qū)村民醫(yī)療負擔．
2．Therefore，giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam is my first challenge I am to face consciously．句子里giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam是動名詞做主語；I am to face consciously是my first challenge 的定語從句．
因此，發(fā)揮強項，減小弱項，為高考做充足的準備是我現(xiàn)在的首要的挑戰(zhàn)．

解答 Dear Nancy，
I'm glad to hear from you．Now I am writing to share you my dream．（點明寫信的目的）
Our homeland dreams to restore the former glory，which inspires me to recall my dream-to become a doctor，saving lives and shouldering a burden of low-expense medical treatment for distant poor villagers．【高分句型一】（自己的人生夢想）
Being a motivation and goal，dreams make us determined，diligent and devoted as well as making life more meaningful．However，it is quite plain that obstacles cast a fierce eye on me alongside．Therefore，giving full play to strengths and minimizing weaknesses in current preparation for the entrance exam is my first challenge I am to face consciously．【高分句型二】Also，I am fully convinced that sparing no efforts to offer toil and sweat firmly and consistently will contributes a lot．（如何實現(xiàn)自己的夢想）
I am in curiosity about yours and reply to me soon，please．（希望知道對方的夢想）
Yours，
Li Hua

點評 考查提綱類作文．
本文采用了較高級的詞匯和句型，使文章亮點多多．但是對于普通水平的學生，在高考中不主張用自己不能熟練使用的句型或詞匯，用錯不如不用．