Question

【題目】一個英文網(wǎng)站面向中學生征稿。請你寫一篇英文稿件，介紹“中秋節(jié)”及這個節(jié)日里的主要活動。

寫作要點：它是中國傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日之一；家人團聚；賞月、吃月餅、還有旅游、訪友等其他活動。

注意：

(1)詞數(shù)100左右；

(2)可以適當增加細節(jié)，以使用文連貫；

(3)開頭語已您寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。

參考詞匯：中秋節(jié):the Mid-Autumn Festival 農(nóng)歷: lunar calendar

賞月: enjoy the full moon 月餅: moon cake

The Mid- Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of Our Chinese lunar calendar.

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Answer 1

【答案】The Mid- Autumn Festival

The Mid-Autumn Festival falls on the 15th of the eighth month of our Chinese lunar calendar. As one of the traditional Chinese festivals, it has been enjoying great popularity in our country. Usually, no matter how far away or how busy we are, we will try to come home for the celebration. The moon that night looks the brightest in the whole lunar month. What we love most is the time we enjoy the full moon together. With the beautiful moon up in the sky, we sit together and eat moon cakes and fruit, sharing our stories. In addition to these traditional activities, we have a wider range of choices such as travelling and visiting our relatives or friends.

【解析】這是一篇提綱類作文。要求學生介紹中秋節(jié)以及這個節(jié)日的主要活動。話題貼近生活，學生也比較熟悉。是比較好寫的一篇作文。這篇作文主要采取現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。學生在寫作過程中，容易出現(xiàn)逐條翻譯的問題。建議學生們適當增加情節(jié)，使文章內(nèi)容豐富。

【范文點評】該范文表達比較流暢，采用了popularity，no matter how，a wider range of等較高級詞匯和短語。成功運用了現(xiàn)在完成進行時態(tài)（has been enjoying great popularity），主語從句（what we love most），with的復合結(jié)構(gòu)（with the beautiful moon up in the sky），非謂語動詞（sharing our stories）等高級句式。