Question

高三年級是高中生活的最后一年，在這一年中，學生們要面臨著沉重的升學壓力。因此，很多學生下課后也坐在教室里用功，但學習效率和成績并不理想。由此你想告訴他們：適當?shù)男菹⒑苡斜匾��，F(xiàn)在就請你以“A Ten - minute Break”為主題，按下列要點寫一篇短文，讓這些同學從中有所啟發(fā)。短文的要點如下：
1．十分鐘的課間休息很有必要。
2．要注意適當?shù)男菹⒎绞健?br /> 3．你是怎樣利用這十分鐘的。
注意：①開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計入總詞數(shù)；②字數(shù)120字左右。
A Ten - minute Break
As a Senior Three student, time seems much limited.                          
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Answer 1

A Ten –minute Break
As a Senior Three students, time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to study from early morning till late afternoon, even during the ten-minute break.
In my opinion, to take a ten-minute break between classes is definitely necessary. Otherwise we will feel tired both physically and mentally. During the ten-minute break, we do something to get rid of tiredness. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in that period is really good for us.
My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercises. Sometimes I have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk outside. when the next class begins, I feel fresh again.
Experience tells me that making progress needs a thorough and persevering process, but we all know people who can’t find time for recreation are obliged sooner or later to fail.

解析試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。高三年級是高中生活的最后一年，在這一年中，學生們要面臨著沉重的升學壓力。因此，很多學生下課后也坐在教室里用功，但學習效率和成績并不理想。由此你想告訴他們：適當?shù)男菹⒑苡斜匾��，F(xiàn)在就請你以“A Ten - minute Break”為主題，按下列要點寫一篇短文，讓這些同學從中有所啟發(fā)。短文的要點如下： 1．十分鐘的課間休息很有必要。2．要注意適當?shù)男菹⒎绞健?．你是怎樣利用這十分鐘的。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點說明】What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired.這里含有一個主語從句。Experience tells me that making progress needs a thorough and persevering process, but we all know people who can’t find time for recreation are obliged sooner or later to fail.這里含有一個定語從句
考點：話題類作文