Question

9．某海外學(xué)校舉辦英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)，開設(shè)了如下課程：園藝（gardening）、烹飪（cooking）、防身術(shù)（self-defense）、護(hù)理（nursing）．
   假如你是王躍華，寫一封申請(qǐng)信，報(bào)名參加其中一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)，信的內(nèi)容必須包括：
1．你感興趣的課程．
2．你期望從這門課程中學(xué)到什么．
3．為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容．
注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100詞左右．
2．開頭已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)．

Answer 1

分析 這是一篇提綱作文，讓我們寫一封申請(qǐng)信，報(bào)名參加英語(yǔ)夏令營(yíng)的一門課程的學(xué)習(xí)，這需要我們發(fā)揮英語(yǔ)思維，將提供的信息用英語(yǔ)完整流暢的表達(dá)出來．寫作需要用第一人稱，時(shí)態(tài)主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)包括：你感興趣的課程．你期望從這門課程中學(xué)到什么．為什么想學(xué)這些內(nèi)容．我們此篇作文分為兩部分，第一部分為作者感興趣的課程以及期望從中學(xué)到什么．第二部分為學(xué)習(xí)此課程的原因．
重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)與句型：
be available to 可得到的，可利用的
tell..apart 區(qū)分開來
Last but not least最后但同樣重要
add…to 增添，增加
高分句型一：The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden．．此句用了why 引導(dǎo)定語(yǔ)從句以及that引導(dǎo)的表語(yǔ)從句
高分句型二：In addition，I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening，missing a chance to have a word with nature，so that knowing the surroundings is indispensable．此句用了現(xiàn)在分詞missing作結(jié)果狀語(yǔ)，順其自然的結(jié)果

解答 Dear Sir，
It is said that a summer camp is to be held in your school and a few courses are available to choose from．I am interested in gardening because I believe it features my character and personal benefits．During the learning period，I expect to gain some unexpected knowledge．A radical technique I'd like to obtain is to know how to tell different species of plants and flowers apart．This helps me to have a clearer outlook of those in my garden．Furthermore，the proper cutting time and frequency to water are some other skills I want to learn．A little knowledge concerning choosing suitable soil or the reasonable planting positions will also be a good choice．（作者感興趣的課程以及期望從中學(xué)到什么）
The main reason why I choose gardening is that I want to help my parents with their work in the domestic garden．（高分句型一）In addition，I find that we students generally lack the knowledge of gardening，missing a chance to have a word with nature，so that knowing the surroundings is indispensable（高分句型二）．Last but not least，by attending the course，I will have a meaningful summer vacation，and drowning myself between plants will by all means add a brilliant touch to my life．（學(xué)習(xí)此課程的原因）
Yours
Wang Yuehua

點(diǎn)評(píng) 英語(yǔ)寫作是一項(xiàng)主觀性較強(qiáng)的測(cè)試題．它不僅考查學(xué)生的寫作基礎(chǔ)而且還考查學(xué)生在寫作過程中綜合運(yùn)用語(yǔ)言的能力．在撰寫時(shí)要注意主謂語(yǔ)一致，時(shí)態(tài)呼應(yīng)，用詞貼切等．要提高英語(yǔ)寫作水平，需要兩方面的訓(xùn)練：一是語(yǔ)言基礎(chǔ)方面的訓(xùn)練，要有扎實(shí) 的造句、翻譯等基本功，即用詞法、句法等知識(shí)造出正確無誤的句子；二是寫作知識(shí)和能力 方面的訓(xùn)練以掌握寫作方面的基本方法和技巧．