Question

假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在正參加一場(chǎng)英語演講比賽，你抽到的演講題目是Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine. 請(qǐng)你就該話題展開演講。你的演講必須包含以下三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：

1. 你對(duì)此話的理解；

2. 用一個(gè)事例來支持你的理解；

3. 總結(jié)發(fā)言。

注意：詞數(shù)120左右。首尾已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。

Ladies and Gentlemen,

It’s my honour to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine”.

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Thanks for your attention!

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Ladies and Gentlemen,

 It’s my honour to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for Life, and Every Day will be Sunshine”. It conveys the message that positive attitude really counts in our life. Once we adopt a positive attitude towards life, we may overcome whatever difficulty there is in our way, realize our dreams and gain success.

Here I share one of my experiences with you. With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, I was filled with great anxiety. Under great pressure, I couldn’t apply myself to study, resulting in failing an important examination. As you can guess, I got very frustrated. I remember clearly when I was in a bad mood, my headteacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and gave me a badge with a big smile on it and said, “In life we all have those moments when we can’t achieve what we want. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you, but turn them into motivation and let them inspire you.” The badge she gave to me was a reminder which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life. Consequently, I gained what I deserved in the next examination.

As we can see in the story, it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to confront tough difficulties and with smile, you can improve your result to achieve anything you want in life.

【解析】

試題分析：考察半開放性作文寫作。本文的話題是“微笑面對(duì)生活，每一天都充滿陽光”；講述的是樂觀向上的情緒對(duì)我們的影響。當(dāng)我們用積極向上的態(tài)度對(duì)待一切的時(shí)候，我們會(huì)非常開心。工作的效率也會(huì)非常高。另外還可以從相反的方面做進(jìn)一步的闡述，如果我們不能微笑面對(duì)生活，我們可能會(huì)遇見很多困難。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。

考點(diǎn)：考察半開放性作文寫作

點(diǎn)評(píng)：半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。