Question

假設(shè)你現(xiàn)在正參加一場英語演講比賽，你抽到的題目是“Smile for life, and every day will be sunshine”.請你就該話題展開演講。你的演講必須包含以下三個(gè)方面的內(nèi)容：

1. 你對此話的理解；  

2. 用一個(gè)事例來支持你的觀點(diǎn)；   

3. 總結(jié)發(fā)言。

注意：1. 詞數(shù)：1 20左右；

2．文章的開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；

3．可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，使行文連貫。

Ladies and gentlemen,

 It’s my honor to give a speech here. My topic of speech is “Smile for life, and every day will be sunshine.”              _________________________________        ___     

Thanks for your attention.   

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version 

 Ladies and gentlemen,

     It’s my honor to give a speech here. My topic of speech is ”Smile for life, and every day  will be sunshine” It conveys the message that positive attitude really counts in our life. Once we adopt a positive attitude towards life, we may overcome whatever difficulty there is in our way, realize our dreams and gain success. 

Here I share one experience with you. With the College Entrance Examination drawing near, I was filled with great anxiety. Under great pressure, I couldn’t applying myself to study, resulting in failing in the examination. I got very frustrated. Just then ,my head teacher, Miss Zhang, approached me and said “In life we all have moments when we can’t achieve what we want. It is natural. Don’t allow those moments to weaken you, but turn them into motivation to inspire you.” Her words were a reminder which provided me with constant encouragement to smile for life. Consequently, I gained what I deserved .

So from the story, it is an optimistic attitude that matters most of all. It gives you the confidence to confront tough difficulties and to achieve what you want in your life.

Thanks for your attention!

【解析】

試題分析：考察半開放性作文的寫作。本文考察考生對于“Smile for life, and every day will be sunshine”的理解。實(shí)際上就是要求我們要積極，樂觀地面對生活中的各種不如意。保持積極向上的心態(tài)，我們就能客服一切困難�？忌�可以列舉具體事例來輔助說明。半開放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體，如besides, further, last but not least等。在發(fā)表個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)的時(shí)候，可以使用諺語來提升整個(gè)文章的檔次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。

【亮點(diǎn)說明】本文中使用了較多的高級詞匯，如conveys，overcome，frustrated，Consequently等；也運(yùn)用了較多的高級句式，如once引導(dǎo)的條件句，I couldn’t applying myself to study, resulting in failing in the examination中的非謂語動詞的用法。沒有追求使用過多的連接詞，而是在關(guān)鍵處使用。行文很流暢自然，不拖沓，結(jié)構(gòu)很緊密。

考點(diǎn)：考察半開放性作文的寫作