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10．我班就"有些學(xué)生在學(xué)校貼吧上發(fā)表對(duì)老師不滿的言語(yǔ)"一事是否妥當(dāng)進(jìn)行討論．下面是討論的結(jié)果．請(qǐng)你以"We should express opinions on our teachers in a right way"為主題 寫一篇報(bào)道介紹這次討論的情況以及你的觀點(diǎn)．

多數(shù)學(xué)生認(rèn)為是錯(cuò)誤的	他們的理由：1．老師永遠(yuǎn)值得尊重 2．背地里說(shuō)壞話是卑鄙的 3．學(xué)生應(yīng)坦誠(chéng)跟老師交流
少數(shù)學(xué)生認(rèn)為是恰當(dāng)?shù)?/TD>	他們的理由：1．可安全、自由地表達(dá)自己觀點(diǎn) 2．當(dāng)面說(shuō)會(huì)讓老師難堪的
你的觀點(diǎn)	？

要求：注意：1．詞數(shù)120左右；   
2．參考詞匯：貼吧 post bar，卑鄙的mean（adj．），難堪的embarrassed （adj．）      
背地里behind one's back/privately
Last week there was a heated discussion about whether we should express freely our opinions on our teachers in our school's post bar．Different students have various opinions on it．Here are their words：

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
They think that only in this way can they express their real thought and feelings freely and safely．
高分句型二：
we should be honest to exchange our inside words with our teachers，which can make the two sides of us beneficial．
句型一 They think that only in this way can they express their real…該句中有部分倒裝句的使用，think后面跟了一個(gè)賓語(yǔ)從句，從句中only位于句首，當(dāng)位于句首又修飾介詞短語(yǔ)時(shí)，句子應(yīng)使用部分倒裝：can they express their real 即主語(yǔ)同謂語(yǔ)部分的助動(dòng)詞進(jìn)行位置的交換
句型二 which can make the two sides of us beneficial．該句中有一個(gè)which引導(dǎo)的費(fèi)限制性定語(yǔ)，which在從句中作主語(yǔ)，替代前面整個(gè)主句的內(nèi)容．

解答 Last week there was a heated discussion about whether we should express freely our opinions on our teachers in our school's post bar．（提出觀點(diǎn)）Different students have various opinions on it．Here are their words：
   A majority of the students think that the teachers must be worth respecting permanently．Besides，it is mean that one person make any irresponsible comments behind on others，especially our loved teachers．As a senior student，we should learn how to make a deep communication with our teachers when we have any dissatisfaction to our teachers．（不贊同的原因）
   There is no denying that some students have different opinions and their behaviors．They think that only in this way can they express their real thought and feelings freely and safely．（高分句型一）On the other hand，if a student makes much complaint to teachers face to face，it will bring much embarrass to our teachers．（贊同理由）
   In my opinion，we shouldn't stab our teacher in the back； we should be honest to exchange our inside words with our teachers，which can make the two sides of us beneficial．（高分句型二）（個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)）

點(diǎn)評(píng) 本文是一個(gè)圖標(biāo)類書面表達(dá)，寫作時(shí)應(yīng)注意觀察圖表所提供的信息，盡量要將其所列內(nèi)容清楚表達(dá)；另外考生平時(shí)應(yīng)注意積累相應(yīng)的詞匯，用準(zhǔn)確的、簡(jiǎn)介的語(yǔ)言將作文表達(dá)清楚．