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8．假定英語課上老師要求同桌之間交換修改作文，請你修改你同桌寫的以下作文．文中共有10處語言錯誤，每句中最多有兩處．每處錯誤僅涉及一個單詞的增加、刪除或修改．
增加：在缺詞處加一個漏字符號（∧），并在其下面寫出該加的詞．
刪除：把多余的詞用斜線（\）劃掉．
修改：在錯的詞下劃一橫線，并在該詞下面寫上修改后的詞．
注意：1．每處錯誤及其修改均僅限一詞；
      2．只允許修改10處，多者（從第11處起）不計分．
 
Dear Sir，
I'm writing to become one of the host family of the British students．
We have a large and clean house，where lies in the center of the city．I can speak English fluent and my parents are both English teachers．Therefore，we won't have any difficulty communicate with English speakers．My father is an excellent driver but we can show foreign students around some places of interest in our own car．Last month we received two American students．We had a great fun together．Besides，my mother cooked well，so the students will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．I would greatly appreciate if I could have the opportunity to make friends with you．
I'm looking forward to hearing about you．
                                                                    Yours，
                                                                     Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 這是李華寫的一封信，目的是想讓他們家能夠有機(jī)會成為英國學(xué)生的寄宿家庭之一；在信中，李華主要介紹了自己以及父母的英語水平及其它優(yōu)勢．

解答 Dear Sir，
I'm writing to become one of the hostfamilyof the British students．
We have a large and clean house，where lies in the center of the city．
I can speak Englishfluentand my parents are both English teachers．
Therefore，we won't have any difficulty communicatewith English speakers．
My father is an excellent driverbutwe can show foreign students around some
places of interest in our own car．Last month we received two American students．
We had a great fun together．Besides，my mother cooked well，so the students
will be able to enjoy delicious Chinese food．I would greatly appreciate∧if I could
have the opportunity to make friends with you．
I'm looking forward to hearingaboutyou．
                                                                    Yours，
                                                                     Li Hua．

詳解：
1．family改為families    考查名詞的單復(fù)數(shù)    此處指的是許多寄宿家庭（之一），由于family是可數(shù)名詞，故用復(fù)數(shù)名詞families．
2．where改為which    考查關(guān)系代詞     本句為非限定性的定語從句，由于先行詞 house在該從句中作主語，故用關(guān)系代詞which．
3．fluent改為fluently    考查副詞    此處用來修飾動詞speak，故用副詞fluently．
4．communicate改為communicating    考查固定搭配     have any/some difficulty （in） doing sth．意為：做某事有困難；故用communicating．
5．but改為and/so   考查句意關(guān)系以及連詞    本句的意思是：我的父親是一名優(yōu)秀的司機(jī)，（那么/因此）我們可以用我們自己的車帶著外國學(xué)生參觀一些名勝古跡；此處表示順承/因果關(guān)系，故用and/so． 
6．cooked改為cooks    考查時態(tài)   此處介紹的是李華的母親現(xiàn)在的情況，應(yīng)使用一般現(xiàn)在時；故用cooks．
7．去掉a    考查不可數(shù)名詞    由于fun是不可數(shù)名詞，所以它的前面不能加不定冠詞，故去掉great之前的a．
8．a(chǎn)ppreciate后加it    考查固定表達(dá)   I would greatly appreciate it if意為：如果…我將不勝感激；故在appreciate后加it．  
9．you改為them    考查人稱代詞的一致性    此處在句中作賓語，指代的是來中國家庭寄宿的英國學(xué)生們，故用them．
10．a(chǎn)bout改為from    考查固定搭配   hear from意為：收到某人的來信；故用from．

點(diǎn)評 短文改錯是集語法知識與語言技能為一體的綜合性試題，主要考查學(xué)生對詞匯、語法和語篇三要素的把握能力．錯誤類型一般有：缺詞、多詞和錯詞．常見的錯誤有：1 詞法錯誤，主要包括動詞、名詞、冠詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞和介詞等詞類誤用、同義詞混淆使用、固定搭配等方面．解答此類試題時，需要正確分析句子成分，熟練掌握各詞類的用法以及掌握一些固定搭配等．2 常見句法錯誤．通常表現(xiàn)為簡單句、復(fù)合句以及疑問句、祈使句、感嘆句和強(qiáng)調(diào)句等錯誤．解答此類試題時，需要掌握各類句子的句式結(jié)構(gòu)及意義用法．3 應(yīng)在理解文章大意的前提下，進(jìn)行作答．